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    用这色,我地平线看起来很大吗?颜色的渐变会让地平线看起来更大吗?

    今天下午当日落的时候,天空是粉色的,而不是通常的橙子色。因为汽车不断地摇晃,我不可以都没有办法拍照片因为汽车不断跳。

    does this shade make my horizon look big?

    The sunset colored today's sky a rare occurence of pink instead of the usual orange. I couldn't snap a decent picture because the car kept bouncing.


    Comment: 不可以sometimes mean, you are not allowed or forbid, so here is not proper to use this.

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    June 1, 2016
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    我第一次去中国

    因为我以前没去过中国,所以我很高兴去!当我飞机在云层之上,天是蓝的,当飞机下去到云层之下,天是灰色的!它把我吓坏了!降落以后,我去了火车站。我进去火车站,看到了火车站的好漂亮的大理石地板。我暗想:“好漂亮啊!!!!!好清洁,好闪亮!”。一些几秒以后,我看了一个好胖的男人吐在地板上。我对他大喊大叫的:“我们在火车站的里面!!你为什么吐在好漂亮的地板上????!”。他不理我的走去了。。。我终于明白,这是为什么这地板这么闪亮。。。我也是醉了


    Comment: So fun, and I can't believe this is wrote by a foreigner. So cool.

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    May 31, 2016
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    Chinese sentences 10 (to look/see, possesions)

    this is a beautiful place! --> 这是一个美丽的地方
    It is very windy. -->是风很大
    This is a cute dress. -->这是一件可爱的衣服
    your dress looks cute. -->你的衣服很可爱
    this is my father's car. -->这是我爸的车
    My t-shirt is a little dirty. -->我的 t 恤是有点脏.
    look over there you can see the mountains.--> 看那里你可以看到山
    look the bird on the tree. --> 看那只鸟在树上树上的鸟
    look the bird over there. --> 看那边的那只鸟
    which way to you want to go(walk)? -->哪条路到你想要去(走)哪条路?


    Comments: sometimes the order is very different between Chinese and English. Good.

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    May 31, 2016
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    Listen to some VOA learning English Today, I try to listen to some VOA English, the pronunciation is slow enough for me to hear clearly. However, sometimes I found it's still difficult for me to understand what they are saying as the limit understand of the word. So I think maybe I need to remember more English words, in this case, I can understand the VOA English much easier. Fighting, I hope that one day I can speak English as my native language.
    May 30, 2016
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    只有 跟 唯一

    下面是用“唯一” 跟 “只有” 的一些句子。我刚学过 “唯一” 这个词语。我经常混淆用法。。我想要知道有没有差别。

    1. 我唯一想回家吃饭

    我只想回家吃饭

    1. 我唯一的关心的是宝宝的健康。

    我只有一个关心。。。我宝宝的健康。Usually, we don't say like this.

    3. 只有一个学生通过了数学考试。

    他是唯一通过数学考试的学生。

    4. 学校里有一个学生通过了数学试。

    他是学校里唯一通过数学试的学生。


    Cooment: Sometimes I find it's hard to say the difference between “唯一” and "只有"。


    1. “唯一” sometimes meas "only one", so you can't say I only one want to go back home for dinner. "只有" means only, so you can say I only want to go back home for dinner.


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    May 30, 2016
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    Chinese Sentences 9 (feelings, states)

    But it might also be better. --> 但也可能会更好.
    But it might taste a little bitter.--> 但可能会有一点微苦.
    But it might be hot. --> 但可能会热.
    But it might rain today. --> 但今天可能会雨来下雨.
    Can you bring me a glass? --> 你能给我一杯吗?
    Do you need a glass? --> 你需要一杯吗?
    Do you need a fork? --> 你需要一个叉子吗?
    The door is locked. --> 门已经锁了.
    Can you close the door? --> 你能把门关上吗?
    Is the door closed? --> 门关上了是吗?
    This is my room, it is not very big. 这是我的房间, 这他不是很大.
    This is my computer.这是我的计算机.
    As you can see I store lots of food in my room. --> 正如你可以看到所见, 我在我的房间中存储了大量的食物
    Do you feel uncomfortable? 你感到不舒服吗?
    Do you feel nauseous? 你想吐吗? or 你感到恶心吗?
    Do you want to go to my room? 你想去到我的房间吗?
    Do you have diarrhea? 你有腹泻吗?


    Comment: good translate

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    May 30, 2016
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    我的新朋友

    今天, 我交了一个朋友。她是中国人。她是我的第一个外国的朋友,所以认识她我很高兴。聊天儿以后,我有事要做,可是我约定做完的时候,我一定跟她一起聊天儿.我希望我和她可以成为好朋友:)


    Comment: don't use too much "儿"

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    May 29, 2016
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    This is the first note in italki I'd like to practice my spoken English, and I found italki in the internet. I want to get a guy who is learning Chinese and have a good English skill too. In that case, I can help him/her to practice Chinese and he/she can help to improve my English at the same time. I also tried to find a good teacher to help me in italki, I need to check more to find if it's worth to spend such money. Maybe as time gone, I can get the answer. Finally, glad to find italki, and hope I can have a good time here and be friend with you.
    May 29, 2016
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    我的学习计划

    这是我的学习计划。在三个年我要去护士学校。我将工作精神病护士。


    If you mean "I will study in the nurses school for three years, and will work as a nurse", you can write as:

    这是我的学习计划。我将会在护士学校学习三年,毕业后成为一名精神病护士。

    If you mean "I will study in the nurses school after three years“, you can write as:

    这是我的学习计划。三年后,我将会在护士学校学习,毕业后成为一名精神病护士。

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    May 28, 2016
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    replacing 问题

    i have used the word 问题 too much, what can i change this with?

    当今现如今我们生活的世界面临着很多问题。 事实上,事情的发生总是一波未平,一波又起。 在这份社会名单上的问题总是无止境的; 例如健康,环境, 失业, 肥胖,政治, 经济等. 在每个方面都存在社会问题。 而这其中哪一个是最突出的,不同国家都有属于自己的立场, 但是这些问题的核心都是人权的问题。 而这也恰恰是我最关心的社会问题。今天我会从三个方面介绍并讨论一下关于人权的问题,其中包括:种族主义,性别平等以及童工。

    首先, 我想说一下种族主义,这个问题在我看来很严重的问题。从小的方面讲,种族主义甚至能够由于不同外表,不同皮肤,不同种族而在学校操场上导致互相的谩骂,同时,它也可能是触发世界大战主要的因素。如果我们不能和谐的一同生活在地球上那将多么的遗憾。


    Comment: Maybe you don't need to write so many "问题", it is not usually to write as this, so I try to delete many of them.

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    May 28, 2016
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