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- Listening to your recording, I wasn't sure if you said 'dense' or 'intense' fragrance to describe the lotus flower. It should be 'intense'. Also, don't use "you'd better" unless you are warning, threatening or giving strong advice. I suggest using 'It is better to look at the lotus from a distance to really appreciate its beauty.'0 votedJuly 24, 20210
- IELTS EXAM Hi there, This was great. There was one mistake that jumped out at me when listening. You said your mum was very 'delightful' when receiving her Mother's Day gift. You should say 'delighted'. Her feeling is 'delighted'. She might say to you, 'This gift is delightful.' Notice how when she refers to the gift, she uses 'delightful'. Think of 'bored' and 'boring'. It is the same rule. You feel 'bored'. The book is 'boring'. Also, you can think another person is 'boring or delightful' because they are behaving this way, or it is their characteristic. For example, 'Peter was so boring today, the way he talked and talked about the weather.'0 votedJuly 24, 20210
- My weekend<s>On my</s> Last weekend I travelled to another city to celebrate my sister's graduation because she had finished <s>her</s> college. It was a great <s>cellebration</s> celebration/occasion and party. Also I <s>eated</s> ate great food and talked to my others parents. <s>In a specific time</s> At some point, the <s>pleople</s> people started to dance but I <s>don't</s> didn't dance because I<s> leave</s> left the party early after the dinner.<em>Hi, to improve, you need to practise your past tenses. I wasn't sure what you meant by 'my others parents'. Do you mean 'my parents' or 'other people's parents' or you could simply say 'others', meaning 'other people'?</em>0 votedAugust 26, 20190
Stories of my Dogs
P1. Dogs in Vietnam
If you have ever gone to Vietnam, you maybe hear might have heard this: "There are people sold who sell dogs, sold and cats, are there?". From the quite quiet roads in rural areas to the noisy lanes in urban ones, small merchants tend to go for buying to buy dogs and cats there with this (?). In Vietnam, one a dog could be a friend, a housekeeping a guard dog, but he also could also be the good for selling as meat.
In my country, "this good" existed for a long time ago this is customary. People server served dog and cat meat for drinking parties or events. The dishes made from them are still very popular in my country. They are even considered as one of the national dishes in Vietnam. In the past, (?) Dogs and cats were treated by the way as same as in the same way as pigs and chickens. So there are many people in my country kept in mind who still believe that dogs and cats are just were their tools to earn money a means of earning money, whether they were rich or poor.Hiya, I've just amended some phrases so they sound more natural. Bye for now, fiona
0 votedJuly 10, 20161Reading not adapted books
Today I've finished my first book on in english language that wasn't adapted for my intermediate level.
It was very slow process for me,as I'd spend spent a lot of time by using dictionaries. I read an e-book from on my IPad and an application helps helped me with translating words but it still was still a challenge. I spent about four months to read reading it to the end but finally I have made it.
Reading a not non-adapted book was important because in other way it the alternatives wouldn't be interesting for to me. The plot of the real book grasped gripped me and I continued reading again and again; I wanted to know how it's ends it ended.
And I am happy with the results. I've improved my reading speed and learned a lot of words. It was has provided a great boost in my to my learning.Hiya, that sounded like a real challenge! In your writing, there are some errors with your tense use. In the first sentence, you use the time word 'today' so as a result, I would use the past simple tense for 'finish'. If you hadn't used a time reference, you could have used 'have finished'. Also, I wouldn't use 'had spent' in the second sentence because it is a simultaneous action with 'it was a slow process' and is not an action before this. We use past perfect to sequence one action or state before another e.g. 'It had stopped raining by the time we left the restaurant.' I hope this helps. Bye for now, Fiona
0 votedJuly 10, 2016121 years old
Today I was 21 years old. My roommates made threw a small party for me. It is included: scream cake, fruits, hot dogs and snacks, and candies.
I lived With 2 close friends. They studied at the same my high school as me. Although each all of our us was were studying at another different universities, we have lived together for 3 years since became becoming freshman.
Today, for the first time, we took a photo of 3 Persons (who?). It Is reculious!ridiculous However, I don't like take taking photos. And my roommates are the same, either. :))
21 years old. I hope keep smile myself, good living with grateful everyone and more adult (I don't understand this sentence).
Hope.Happy Birthday!!!!
from Fiona.
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