Essay about old workers. Please share your opinion or make correction.

It is not wise for an industry to replace its experienced but old workers with new and young yet inexperienced individuals.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?


The labor force has always been a major key in a the business world. Most of the people consider that it is not rational for a company to attract inexperienced fresh employees instead of old experts, what's which could be unfair for the latter group second ones. I personally absolutely agree with the given statement.

Unfortunately, but the present society lives in a materialistic world, where the money plays the a major role, what which means that human and ethical feelings are moved back by businessmen due to priority for a company's profit. Thus, if the productivity will go downwards, no one will look at one's length of work and its contribution to for the company’s life. Typically, in this case, the old worker is being replaced by the young one.

It is  I am? convinced, experienced individuals of every industry should be hold held as valuable assets. Especially, critical roles should not be given to inexperienced graduates; rather, every company should have to provide a well structured programme that helps to involve newbies without losing veterans. Some human resources experts support the idea of mentorship, where old advisors could share their knowledges with green hands, which, in turn, would expand their skills for updated technologies. For instance, the Japanese conception to let people to work for one company during all for their whole life until the retirement age without any afraid fear of being fired due the to age.

In a nutshell, I am inclined to believe that sometimes managers make not unwise decisions to fire the old and experienced employees, considering age as the only factor. Thus, people should find an optimal approach with to solving this problem.



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Sometimes dreams come true

It was the most important moment in his life and the history of all humanity. His spacecraft landed on the planet Saturn. Having imagined that moment so many times in his mind, he was now sitting in the chair and looking at the surface of Saturn through the huge screen of the spacecraft.

He remembered the day when he got fired from his boring office job. He was not a child, but he couldn’t get himself to think about anything other than stars. He was so shy that he couldn’t make himself talk with anyone about it. He asked himself what he had to do now. It seemed It it was time to achieve the dream.

Some days later, he got selected in a team for the flight to Saturn. He didn’t care how much money he would get paid for that. There was only one chance and he couldn’t lose it, despite his dream stealing him from his family.

Recalling all of that, he got outside, set foot on the surface of the planet and felt…nothing.




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You shouldn’t rely on your family and friends in choosing a career (essay)

Choosing a career is one of the most important decisions of one’s life. Some people think that relatives or close friends can always help to choose the best way, but others believe that only one’s personal choice is right. I’m in favour of the second opinion and now I’ll explain why.
Firstly, values of your parents or friends can don’t always suit you. While many people are looking for a big salary, different people want to get mental satisfaction from their job. Even relatives are really different. Remember it this. Secondly, only you know what is really interesting for you. For example, my friend is keen on maths and physics. He thinks that the best profession is an engineer, but it’s so boring for me. Therefore, he shouldn’t recommend me this occupation to me because it’s just not for me.
My opponents may say that elder relatives usually have a lot of useful experience which they can share.
I can’t agree with them. Their experience can help you only if you will take over their job in their place. But what if you’re going to move to a different town or even to go abroad? You’ll completely change working conditions. In this case, their experience is useless.
To sum up, I think that the most right best way of choosing a profession is to listen to parents’ and friends’ advices advice, to think it over and then to choose a job yourself.


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My Ordinary Day

My Ordinary Day
Every day I wake up at 9 o’clock. My morning starts with taking a shower. In the bathroom I clean my teeth, have a wash, and comb my hair. Once a week I cut my nails. I love to wash my face with a bit of ice in order to refresh it. According to the research, this procedure is very healthy for keeping a young face. Then I usually have a hearty breakfast. I prefer to eat fresh produce, such as eggs, milk, curds, cheese, or sour cream. In the mornings I have a healthy appetite.
I leave home at 10 o’clock, and I reach my university at 10:25 a.m.o’clock. I go there on a foot - hiking is very healthy for the bodyorganism.
OnUpon coming home at 4 p.m.,  I have a light dinner. I try to eat a balanced diet, that’s waywhy I care about my healthy eating. Twice a day, I take regular vigorous exercise. Near to my home there is fitness equipment on the street. I use it to keep my fit. The English proverb says, “A sound mind in a sound body.”
At 5 o’clock I go for a walk. I get great enjoyment out of my home in the mountains; the area around Almaty has some breathtaking scenery – mountains, lakes, cliftscliffs. Sometimes I take a picture of the snow-covered mountains, and I stop for a few minutes to admire the view.
I take pleasure in making a meal - I love home-cooked food. Then I buy fresh food in the supermarkets, mop the floors, do the dishes, take the rubbish out, do laundry, polish, iron, air the rooms, and water the plants. All plants require enough water. I have a particular liking for looking at them.
At 7 o’clock I have a supper, which includes vegetables, fruits, and a cup of fresh tea.
At 7.30 p.m. o’ clock I do my homework. My speciality is Russian philology, so I have to read a great deal of books, work with different texts, and read about a great many writers, and poets. “No gain without pain.”
In my free time I like listening to quiet, relaxing music, and watching the movies, and serials. Learning foreign languages gives me pleasure. In my opinion it is a bit complicated to study them; however, I try to improve my skills.
“Time is money.” I appreciate the time.
I go to a bed at 11:45p.m. I fall asleep fast.



I hope this helps! :) Good luck with your studies! I visited Almaty last summer and now I am missing it again :)

Last summer :)

Last summer i I had an incredible journey through three European countries : Italy, Spain, and Germany. I have a great habit:, every spring ( in May ) I make apply for a sSchengen visa and wait for a burning permit at in June or July. But last summer I was suggested by my friends suggested to me that I to join them in a crazy trip, almost without money! We worked out the plan for a journey for 3 weeks in 10 cities. We decided, that we would earn money by playing music on the street ( most of my friends are musicians). But then we again faced the problem : our low-cost airline tickets were without a baggage. It meant, that we had no opportunity to take the instruments., Tthat's why we bought a guitar, bongs and a kazoo in Italy. We had a problems with hotels ( with out a reasons our reservation was cancelled ), with trains (we mixed up our train 2 times ), with the plane (the plane broke down and the flight was delayed for 15 hours). BUT : it was the best journey of my life!


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