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Hello! I'm John (nickname: Kuro/クロ). I enjoy electronics, programming, games and of course Japan and anime! ^-^ I am a beginner at Japanese but am learning quickly. I like to have a laugh and have an odd sense of humor hehe. (Copy of short intro because im a lazy bum :D) こんにちは! 私はジョンです! 「ニックネームは:クロ」 私はエレクトロニクスとプログラミングとゲームと日本とアニメが好きです! 私は日本語「しんまい?」ですが、がんばります!
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    02: Bowling

    I went bowling today.
    It was in the city but underground.
    The place was pretty dark and has nice decor such as colorful lighting.
    Also, I liked that place because it wasn't very big.
    My score was okay.
    It was a nice refresher for me.


    I am on my phone so I cannot use highlighting tools sorry.

    Bowling is fun, but I am not very good at it! :D

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    June 12, 2016
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    Raising children

    I went to my friends house today.
    She has two kids. They are very active!
    I asked her what the hardest part of raising a child is.
    She said she had to take care of kids all day and they (always?) follow her so she was very tired everyday. I played with them and I understood what she meant although it was just for 5 hours.


    Hello, I am on my phone so I cannot use the highlighting tools, sorry.

    If your friend is still raising children then 'is' can be used, since you asked the question in the past, but the children are still being raised now.

    The final part is a bit difficult for me to understand. Did you mean she is with the children all day and they always follow her?

    Raising children sure seems like hard work doesn't it? ^-^

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    June 12, 2016
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    Conversation in the train.

    There were a mother and a daughter in (on) the train today. (You can also say: There was a mother and daughter on the train today).
    The daughter seemed to be looking for a boyfriend.
    She asked her mother:
    "Which do you think is good (better) for me as a boyfriend: Someone who is good looking but has a terrible personality, or someone who is ugly but has great characteristics?".
    The mother told her: "That's too extreme! Just find a moderate one!".


    Grey: A more natural suggestion is provided in brackets
    Yellow: Corrections
    Orange: Spelling error

    I agree with the mothers advice! (^-^)

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    June 8, 2016
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    My hobby is Japanese animation.

    I love animation name is The name of the animation i love is Gundamu!
    Gundam is the a robot anime, and it draws the warmth and sadness of the human mind.
    Do you know the word new type?
    The meaning of it is the innovation of the human race.
    Leading heart with people of the far distance. (I am not sure i understand this part, sorry)
    It is beyond the universe.
    Today we end up here.


    It was a little difficult to understand, but i tried to correct what i was able :)

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    June 4, 2016
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    I entered this website right now I have just started using this website

    Hi! I'm a Japanese who wants to joyfully study English joyfully :)
    I don't know how to use this website very well.
    Anyway, plz see my profile page.


    Hello SEA, welcome to italki!

    "I'm a Japanese who wants to study English in an enjoyable way" may sound a little more natural. I assume the 'plz' is intentional netspeak for 'please', so i'll let that slide hehe :D

    I wish you the best of luck with your English studies, and i hope you enjoy it. がんばって下さい! ^-^

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    June 1, 2016
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    May 29, 2016
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    When it's raining, it reminds of me what my friend said...

    I used to be like that too. I get a gloomy feeling when it's raining. But since my father passed away last year, when it rains I remember what my friend said when she was consoling me while I was in sorrow . She said that "The Sun always comes back out but we need the moments of rain to make everything around us beautiful again" I have no words to describe that how much I was cheered up by her words at the time. I always remind her when it's raining. I've come to be more realised that take more notice of the greenery outside and appreciate when it's raining since last year. When it rains, I see the prosperity it brings to see the nature i see around me now. Rather than feeling gloomy in the rains as I once did, now I look forward to what it will bring. I want to be surrounded by green plants.



    I enjoyed reading that! Thank you :)

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    May 28, 2016
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    May 25, 2016
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    新しい友だち Hello. This is my first notebook entry. Thank you in advance for correcting my terrible Japanese ^-^'. こんにちは! これは私のさいしょのノートブックentryです。私の日本語はまだまだです。 昨日、私は新しい友だちと話しました。すごく楽しかったですよ! その人はこのサイトに会った(出会った?)です。
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    The bookstores

    I'm a university student and i also work at a book store as a part time job worker. I work for 15 hours a week. Lately, more and more people buy the books on the from on-line shops like Amazon. I sometimes use Amazon too. But I also use the real book stores because I want to pick some books up. Though on-line shops are very convenient, I will continue to using the real book stores.


    Hello. Very well done! The existing corrections are great, but I am just adding an alternative correction :)

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    May 25, 2016
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