Vsak dan

Vsak dan jaz zgodaj vstanem - ob šestih ali sedmih zjutraj. Grem na internet in kratko  malo -1  se pogovarjam s prijatelji ali družino iz Rusije. Mi imamo drugačen-2 čas - v Rusiji je dvanajst, ko je v Sloveniji šest zjutraj. Potem (jaz)-3 imam zajtrk ob 7ih, vsak dan jem jajce v kruhu in pijem kavo. Ko jem zajtrk (jaz)-4 gledam youtube. Potem grem v kopalnicо, si umijem-5 umivam obraz in zobe. Vsak torek in četrtek grem na tečaj, kjer (mi)-6 se učimo slovenščine. Vsak drugi dan grem v službо ali delam (od)-7 doma.

Ob pol enih grem domov na kosilo. Potem grem na kratek sprehod, ker imam vsak dan potrebo po aktivnosti. Moja najljubša aktivnost je hoditi v gozdu ali (samo)-8 po mestu. Jaz sem zelo veseli vesela-9 sonca in toplote. Jaz sem grem-10 rada grem na Ljubljanski grad, ko je jasno vreme, ker (jaz)-11 lahko fotografiram mesto, (ko vidim goro.)-12 To so moje fotografije(spodaj) . Včasih ob vikendih mi vozimo na v-13 avto v gore v Sloveniji in Avstriji. Ko je v Ljubljani slabo in mrzlo vreme mi vozimo gremo-14 v Italijio na morje. Tam je vsak dan toplo in sonce sije. Včasih grem na Šmarno goro ali v gozd na Golovec. Včasih (jaz) grem v BTC in oblečem razno pomerim kakšno-15 obleko, lahko jo kupim jo ali prosto grem po trgovinah. Domov iz trgovine rada kolesarim, to je 20 minut. Ko imamo čas radi s puncami gremo na kavo in pogovarjamo se tam . Ko imamo čas, s puncam gremo rade na kavo, kjer se pogovarjamo.-16 Ko moja mama pride, midve radi potujeva radi po Sloveniji ali po Italiji. Jaz ne kuham rada, rada počivam, ko kuhajo zame. Včasih dealam jogo ali plavam v bazenue.

Včasih zvečer ali zjutraj študiram slovenščino. Ko imam čas, (jaz) gledam serije ali film. Vsak večer, ko grem spat,(jaz) rada poslušam avdio-knjige. Vsak dan grem spat zgodaj ob 10ih zvečer.

First of all I must say that you are quite good, sure you make mistakes but it is more to the difference in grammar than actual mistakes. Keep up the good work! :)

1 malo - it means a little bit, "kratko" stands for short, like your T-shirt is short

2  I don´t know how to explain properly but it should be like that

3, 4 in Sloven we don´t use "I" as often since it is clear from the verb form that it is about the first person in singular

5 instead of "I wash" you said "I am washing"  

6 that "mi" is not required, also it should be places after "se" if you want to use it anyway

7 do you want to say that you work from home or that you do work at home?

8 did you want to say that you either like to walk only in forest or city or in both?

9 since you are talking about yourself you must use the female version of "vesel"

10 the sentence didn't make sense

11 same as 3 and 4, in future I just put it in brackets

12 when do you take pictures only when you see the mountains or?

13 I corrected it to make sense, even though in sloven we like to use the expression I used in number 14

15 I presume you wanted to say that you try some clothes