Corrections · 1
Vsak dan
Vsak dan jaz zgodaj vstanem - ob šestih ali sedmih zjutraj. Grem na internet in kratko malo -1 se pogovarjam s prijatelji ali družino iz Rusije. Mi imamo drugačen-2 čas - v Rusiji je dvanajst, ko je v Sloveniji šest zjutraj. Potem (jaz)-3 imam zajtrk ob 7ih, vsak dan jem jajce v kruhu in pijem kavo. Ko jem zajtrk (jaz)-4 gledam youtube. Potem grem v kopalnicо, si umijem-5 umivam obraz in zobe. Vsak torek in četrtek grem na tečaj, kjer (mi)-6 se učimo slovenščine. Vsak drugi dan grem v službо ali delam (od)-7 doma.Ob pol enih grem domov na kosilo. Potem grem na kratek sprehod, ker imam vsak dan potrebo po aktivnosti. Moja najljubša aktivnost je hoditi v gozdu ali (samo)-8 po mestu. Jaz sem zelo veseli vesela-9 sonca in toplote. Jaz sem grem-10 rada grem na Ljubljanski grad, ko je jasno vreme, ker (jaz)-11 lahko fotografiram mesto, (ko vidim goro.)-12 To so moje fotografije(spodaj) . Včasih ob vikendih mi vozimo na v-13 avto v gore v Sloveniji in Avstriji. Ko je v Ljubljani slabo in mrzlo vreme mi vozimo gremo-14 v Italijio na morje. Tam je vsak dan toplo in sonce sije. Včasih grem na Šmarno goro ali v gozd na Golovec. Včasih (jaz) grem v BTC in oblečem razno pomerim kakšno-15 obleko, lahko jo kupim jo ali prosto grem po trgovinah. Domov iz trgovine rada kolesarim, to je 20 minut. Ko imamo čas radi s puncami gremo na kavo in pogovarjamo se tam . Ko imamo čas, s puncam gremo rade na kavo, kjer se pogovarjamo.-16 Ko moja mama pride, midve radi potujeva radi po Sloveniji ali po Italiji. Jaz ne kuham rada, rada počivam, ko kuhajo zame. Včasih dealam jogo ali plavam v bazenue.
Včasih zvečer ali zjutraj študiram slovenščino. Ko imam čas, (jaz) gledam serije ali film. Vsak večer, ko grem spat,(jaz) rada poslušam avdio-knjige. Vsak dan grem spat zgodaj ob 10ih zvečer.
First of all I must say that you are quite good, sure you make mistakes but it is more to the difference in grammar than actual mistakes. Keep up the good work! :)
1 malo - it means a little bit, "kratko" stands for short, like your T-shirt is short
2 I don´t know how to explain properly but it should be like that
3, 4 in Sloven we don´t use "I" as often since it is clear from the verb form that it is about the first person in singular
5 instead of "I wash" you said "I am washing"
6 that "mi" is not required, also it should be places after "se" if you want to use it anyway
7 do you want to say that you work from home or that you do work at home?
8 did you want to say that you either like to walk only in forest or city or in both?
9 since you are talking about yourself you must use the female version of "vesel"
10 the sentence didn't make sense
11 same as 3 and 4, in future I just put it in brackets
12 when do you take pictures only when you see the mountains or?
13 I corrected it to make sense, even though in sloven we like to use the expression I used in number 14
15 I presume you wanted to say that you try some clothes
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!
Start Learning Today
