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I have FMS, RA, & spine issues, disabled in 2012 I still want to teach and learn languages. I have worked really hard this past year to gain the stamina to pursue this.
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    Many coastal cities are going to disapear

    State of global warming up, melting ice are more and more serious, profoundly affected countries having borders with the sea. Predicted in 2100, sea level will rise by 2m, enough to make many coastal zones disappear.

    The newest report of Massachusetts Amherst University published in Nature Magazine of Science says that melting ice in Antarctic is main reason for this status. Just the amount of ice in here will make sea level rising by 1m at the end of this century. The others in different areas will make a rise by 1m, 2m totally.

    Significantly, this prediction shows the much more serious consequence compared to the prediction in 2013 of United Nations. Robert DeConto, one of the reporters illutrates, the sea level is rising considerably every year.

    In the further duration, the sea level is forecasted to rise by 15m by MAU in 2500. “At that time, the world map will be re-draw considerably compare to present”, warning RD.

    Last September, NASA also warned about the whole world sea level will rise at least 1m, much more compare to predictions before. “Even if this predicted figure has decreased, the coastal cities would face with seriously engulfed risks.

    The remaining problem in present is environment policies, such as the way of reduce the amount of industrial emissions, the greenhouse effect. Sciencetists warn that if there isn’t suitable and quickly policies, the whole world will suffer the severe consequence more rapidly than we think.
    P/s: I translated the news from Vietnamese to English


    Many coastal cities are going to disappear.

    Global Warming is melting ice profoundly affecting countries boardering the sea. Predicted by 2100, sea level will rise by 2m, enough to make many coastal zones disappear.

    The latest report from Massachusetts Amherst University published in Nature Magazine of Science states that the melting ice in Antarctic is main reason for this status. Just the amount of ice there will rise the sea level by 1m at the end of this century. The melting of different areas will make a rise by 1m, 2m totally.

    Significantly, this prediction shows the much more serious consequence compared to the prediction in 2013 of United Nations. Robert DeConto, one of the reporters illutrates, the sea level is rising considerably every year.

    The sea level is forecasted to rise by 15m by MAU in 2500. “At that time, the world map will have to be re-drawn considerably to compare to present”, warning RD.

    Last September, NASA also warned about the whole world sea level will rise at least 1m, much more than compared to predictions before. “Even if this predicted figure has decreased, the coastal cities would face with seriously engulfed risks.

    Presently the problem is current environment policies, such as the way of reduce the amount of industrial emissions, the greenhouse effect. Scientists warn that if there isn’t suitable policies and the whole world will suffer the severe consequence quicker than we think.

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    May 20, 2016
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    can you help me with this introduction?

    There are some disapproval of government budget using for artistic work and considering if it could be spent on worthy cause. In my opinion, I disagree that art is less essential to our society. However, I also believe that the good policies and adequate money for art could make a development.


    There is some disapproval of the governments' budget being used for artistic works and consider wether it could be spent on a more worthy cause.  In my opinion I believe that art is less essential to our society.  However, I also believe that the governments' policies are good and adequate money for art could make a difference.

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    May 19, 2016
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    Can you help me with my essay?

    Three pie charts give information about how water is consumed by 3 users in San Diego County, California, and Worldwide. They are separated by the amount they use for residential, industrial and agricultural purposes. San Diego and California consume the most water for residential and agricultural is most consumed Worldwide.
    As can be seen from the charts, residential water is 60% of total water usage in San Diego, with only one fifth consumption used for agriculture and one fourth used in industry. In California water consumption is almost equally divided. 

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    May 15, 2016
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    Could you please correct this essay? Thank you in advance.

    The way of life in any country is determined by the people living there. Cultures differ around the world. However,  advances in technology have made cultures more alike. Clearly my country is not an exception too. The plenty of things has been changed over the time but what is now in my mind is the change in women's lifestyle. In the past, they usually stayed at home and did housework like raising children, cooking, washing dishes and so on. In return the men was responsible for supplying the whole family financially. Consequently, they spent most of their time out of the house, working to get enough income to supply their family. But nowadays both men and women work outside and do housework together. One of the negative changes in the modern lifestyle, according to me, is little physical movements in the daily life. Inactivity can lead to many kinds of diseases, thus damaging the body physically and mentally.
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    May 15, 2016
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