can you help me with this introduction?

There is some disapproval of the governments' budget being used for artistic works and consider wether it could be spent on a more worthy cause.  In my opinion I believe that art is less essential to our society.  However, I also believe that the governments' policies are good and adequate money for art could make a difference.

There are is some disapproval of government budget funds being using used for artistic work [or, art programs], and some critics suggesting considering if it they could be spent on a more worthy cause. In my opinion, I disagree with the idea that art is less non-essential to our society. However, I also believe that the good policies and an adequate money budget for art programs could make a lead to positive development of society.