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    30天中文写作挑战 (5/30) - 我的套房

    现在我住在巴黎附近,所以租房房租很贵。
    我和我的朋友住在一厅一厨一室的两间房子的套房。
    一间屋子是厨房和客厅。我喜欢做饭,但是我没有时候时间。有一张大的桌子和很几几个凳子,朋友来了也很方便。 所以很方便对朋友邀请。
    我们有一个台电视机,可是我们不太看看了不太常看,因为我用电脑的时间多我宁用我的电脑。书架上有很多书, 因为我爱好看书。(因为我爱看书,所以书架上摆了很多书。)
    第二的屋子是的卧房。双人床拿几乎地方。也有小的浴室。
    我希望快可以搬去到三间屋子的套房。久后,我要住在房子跟花园。(我们的卧室放了一张双人床,带有浴室,地方就很小了,我希望尽快搬到有两间卧室的房子。不久后,我应该可以住到大房子里还带有花园。)希望可以帮助到你.



    Today is day 5 of my writing challenge. Thank you in advance for your corrections ! Here the English translation of what I am trying to say in Chinese :

    Right now I live near Paris, so renting a flat is very expensive. My friend and I are living in a two-rooms apartment. The first room is composed of the kitchen and the living room. I like to cook but I don’t have enough time to do so. There is a big table and several stools, so it is very convenient when we invite friends over. We have a television set, but we don’t watch it a lot. I prefer to use my computer. The book shelf is full of books, because I love to read books. The second room is a bedroom. The double bed takes almost all of the space. There is also a small bathroom. I hope that we will be able to move soon to a three rooms apartment. In the future, I want to live in a house with a garden.

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    Ruthi,Thank you, I personally think that help to the improvement of listening comprehension.

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