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30天中文写作挑战 (7/30) – 法国<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"><strike>湮灭</strike></font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"> </font><font style="background-color: yellow;"><font style="background-color: rgb(0, 255, 0);">(洪涝)</font></font>
在最近几个星期,<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"><strike> 在</strike></font>法国下<font style="background-color: rgb(0, 255, 0);">(了)</font>很多雨。
在巴黎附近,因为河流水位增加了, 所以有的地方<font style="background-color: rgb(0, 255, 0);">(被)</font> <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"><strike>湮灭</strike></font><font style="background-color: rgb(0, 255, 0);">(淹没)</font><font style="background-color: rgb(0, 255, 0);"> 了</font>
<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"><strike>湮灭</strike></font> <font style="background-color: rgb(0, 255, 0);"> (洪涝)</font> 是一个<font style="background-color: rgb(0, 255, 0);">(严)</font>重的问题。
比如, 公共交通不 <font style="background-color: rgb(0, 255, 0);">(能)(很)</font>好运转。星期五,从家到公司, 我<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"><strike>加</strike></font> <font style="background-color: rgb(0, 255, 0);">(多用了)</font>一个小时。
今天没下雨。我希望情况<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"><strike>成为</strike></font> <font style="background-color: rgb(0, 255, 0);">(能变得)</font>更好。I changed the "湮灭" to "洪涝" or "淹没" ,when it's a noun, I used "洪涝" ; when it's a verb , I used "淹没"。
"湮灭" is more like a concept in physics, we don't use it in daily life.
Hope it will help!
Hi, today is day 7 of my challenge, I did not have much time to write, so my essay is very short. Anyway, thank you in advance for your help ! Here is the English translation of what I am trying to say in Chinese :
During those last weeks, it has been raining a lot in France. Around Paris, the level of the water has raised, so some places got flooded. These flooding are a big problem. For example, public transports are not working correctly. Friday, it took me one hour more to get from my home to my company. Today, it did not rain. I hope that the situation will get better.0 votedJune 5, 20162- In this sentence,I think that 跟 is followed by the “object” of the verb.You can also use 从 or 向 here,but 跟 is right too . For example,“跟你学” means “learn from you” ,“you ” is the object of “learn”. I hope that will help you to understand. By the way ,Chinese is very flexible,try to understand it in certain context.0 votedMay 1, 20160
昨天晚上我做<font style="background-color: yellow;">(了)</font>什么
昨天晚上我和一些朋友<strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 156, 0);">们</font></strike>【一些 and 们 both mean a few ,more than just one ,so you just need to use one of them.】去<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">(</font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">我的学校)</font>看了<strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 156, 0);">我学校的</font></strike>戏。这个戏非常滑稽<strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 156, 0);">了</font></strike>。
<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">(我的)</font>很多<strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 156, 0);">我</font></strike>朋友<strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 156, 0);">在戏了</font></strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">(参与了这部戏)</font> 【participated in this play】。
他们<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">(很)</font>幽默<strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 156, 0);">感</font></strike> <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">,</font>【you'd better use a comma here.】 所以我们都笑<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">(了)</font>。
我<strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 156, 0);">完的</font></strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">(玩得很)</font>开心<strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 156, 0);">了</font></strike>. <strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 156, 0);">以后</font></strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">(然后 or 之后 or 后来)</font>我回家了<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"> ,</font> 【you'd better use a comma here too.】 而且和我爸爸<strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 156, 0);">说话</font></strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">(聊天)</font> 【the latter one would be better】。我告诉他关于戏<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">(的事情)</font>。
<strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 156, 0);">以后</font></strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"> (然后 or 之后 or 后来)</font>我去用我的电脑。
<strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 156, 0);">二点早上</font></strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"> (早上两点)</font>我还<strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 156, 0);">是</font></strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 156, 0);"> </font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">(在)</font>用电脑,没睡觉。
我一下子<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">(感到)</font>难过 <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">,</font> 因为<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"> (担心)</font>明天我不<strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 156, 0);">会 </font></strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">(能)</font>早起床。我不喜欢晚起床。
今天<strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 156, 0);">十点早上</font></strike> <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">(早上十点)</font>我<strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 156, 0);">跑了</font></strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">(跑步)</font>上山 <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">,</font> 为了<strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 156, 0);">我很</font></strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">(保持)</font>健康【 to keep health】。
我回来<strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 156, 0);">的时候</font></strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">(之后) </font>【the first one means "when I come back" , the latter one means "After I came back" ,the latter would be better】<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 156, 0);"><strike>我</strike></font><strike></strike>吃了早饭和写了这个。
<strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 156, 0);">以后</font></strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">(然后 or 之后 or 后来)</font>,我和朋友一起准备<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">锻炼运动 </font>【锻炼 or 运动,just need one of them here.】
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