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30天中文写作挑战 (7/30) – 法国湮灭 (洪涝)
在巴黎附近,因为河流水位增加了, 所以有的地方(被)
比如, 公共交通不 (能)(很)好运转。星期五,从家到公司, 我
今天没下雨。我希望情况
I changed the "湮灭" to "洪涝" or "淹没" ,when it's a noun, I used "洪涝" ; when it's a verb , I used "淹没"。
"湮灭" is more like a concept in physics, we don't use it in daily life.
Hope it will help!
Hi, today is day 7 of my challenge, I did not have much time to write, so my essay is very short. Anyway, thank you in advance for your help ! Here is the English translation of what I am trying to say in Chinese :
During those last weeks, it has been raining a lot in France. Around Paris, the level of the water has raised, so some places got flooded. These flooding are a big problem. For example, public transports are not working correctly. Friday, it took me one hour more to get from my home to my company. Today, it did not rain. I hope that the situation will get better.
30天中文写作挑战 (7/30) – 法国内涝
在最近几个星期, 在法国降雨量很大。在巴黎附近,因为河流水位上升了, 所以有的地方被淹没。
内涝是一个严重的问题。
比如, 公共交通无法正常运作。星期五,从家到公司, 我用了一个小时。
今天没下雨。我希望情况会好转。
Hi, today is day 7 of my challenge, I did not have much time to write, so my essay is very short. Anyway, thank you in advance for your help ! Here is the English translation of what I am trying to say in Chinese :
During those last weeks, it has been raining a lot in France. Around Paris, the level of the water has raised, so some places got flooded. These flooding are a big problem. For example, public transports are not working correctly. Friday, it took me one hour more to get from my home to my company. Today, it did not rain. I hope that the situation will get better.
30天中文写作挑战 (7/30) – 法国湮灭
在最近几个星期, 法国一直在下雨。在巴黎附近,因为河流水位升高了, 所以有的地方被淹没。洪灾是一个严重的问题。
比如, 公共交通工具不能再吃运转。星期五,从家到公司, 我花了一个多小时。
今天没下雨。我希望情况会好转。
Hi, today is day 7 of my challenge, I did not have much time to write, so my essay is very short. Anyway, thank you in advance for your help ! Here is the English translation of what I am trying to say in Chinese :
During those last weeks, it has been raining a lot in France. Around Paris, the level of the water has raised, so some places got flooded. These flooding are a big problem. For example, public transports are not working correctly. Friday, it took me one hour more to get from my home to my company. Today, it did not rain. I hope that the situation will get better.
30天中文写作挑战 (7/30) – 法国湮灭
在最近几个星期, 在法国下了很多雨。在巴黎附近,因为河流水位升高增加了, 所以有的地方被淹没了湮灭。
内涝湮灭是一个严重的问题。
比如, 公共交通不能正常好运行转。星期五,从家到公司, 我花了加一个多小时。
今天没下雨。我希望情况会成为更好转。
Hi, today is day 7 of my challenge, I did not have much time to write, so my essay is very short. Anyway, thank you in advance for your help ! Here is the English translation of what I am trying to say in Chinese :
During those last weeks, it has been raining a lot in France. Around Paris, the level of the water has raised, so some places got flooded. These flooding are a big problem. For example, public transports are not working correctly. Friday, it took me one hour more to get from my home to my company. Today, it did not rain. I hope that the situation will get better.
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