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1) 我最好的朋友
Here is a short essay on "My best friend". I just want to practice a little, and I'd be really thankful if you could give me some feedback and corrections ! 谢谢大家!
今天我想给大家介绍一下我最好的朋友。
我最好的朋友(一般避免重复出现,用人称代词代替)她叫Deborah,她(重复)比我小一岁. 我们是小学的时候认识的.那时候我们刚刚四岁了(了和刚刚只能留一个).从那时候到现在起(起和到现在意思一样,重复), 我们就是最好的朋友.我们身高个字(个子是口语,书面语:身高)差不多一样(重复).
她现在住在法国, 但我住在中国, 所以我们不能见面. 在法国, 她家跟离我家不远, 但是我们只能偶尔见面, 因为我们的学校现在不一样.她想做一个跟身体有关系的工作, 我想做一个跟汉语有关系的工作. 我不像她, 我们的爱好真的不一样, 但是她是很好的人人很好, 所以她一定是我最好的朋友.我们的关系非常好.
我很想她, 但是我们可以用微信聊天儿!
好的, 谢谢大家!0 votedOctober 30, 20161- Do you understand the Lyrics and melody in Chinese?
About Lyrics
My history teacher say ' our culture has no music melody '
it means in chinese history, Lyrics replaced melody as the most important part for the song
Affected by poetry, most Lyrics was difficult and symbolism (象征性?)
but ,even have no a good melody ,we will affirmed a song because the great Lyrics
can you understand the lyrics like this:
吞风吻雨葬落日未曾彷徨
欺山赶海践雪径也未绝望
拈花把酒偏折煞世人情狂
凭这两眼与百臂或千手不能防
天阔阔雪漫漫共谁同航
这沙滚滚水皱皱笑着浪荡
贪欢一晌偏教那女儿情长埋葬About 韵脚 (Rhyme?}
I cant understand Japanese poetry‘s 韵脚
In Chinese songs ,poetry or otherthing for sing ?read?the last word of every sentence must was 二声或四声
Is there any <a target="_blank" hidefocus="true" href="http://www.baidu.com/link?url=0RC1LcPNMlkwnW98CcgqhW9pMylw3_cxRKuT7SD2ieiog0_XrF9jIVUziePNfK9onxv6Eu_7rMAkulOHgL4cDg_ijgvTfkO9Q2neSM-Cnpm" style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 13.3333px; font-family: arial; line-height: 22.2444px; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">rule</a>s like this in English?
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