Those busy days

This April has been busy for me, the studying became harder because the graduation and the final exam are closer. The teachers told us we should save the time to study everyday, and they think it is bad for us to use the internet while studying during you need to try harder to study. (,,•́ . •̀,,)
The exams became more and more frequent, and it the sky kept raining. I even have no friends to say about the pressure because they have the same trouble.
Also, I know that near the final exam there will be a lot of pressure, hope I can deal with that one a right way.

Pretty good! Only a few things.

You say "Studying became harder." but you would use "the" if you were saying the study of something specific. For example, "The studying of math became harder."

You don't say "The graduation" you can say "The graduation ceremony" or "The graduation party." but not just "the graduation."

"the sky kept raining" sounds a bit strange.

 I even have no friends to say about the pressure because they have the same trouble. <-(I don't know what this means.)

Overall, Great job! 

My favorite thing about my country, the USA, is that there are so many different things! I can go to any part and find an assortment of people, cultures, landscapes, and fun things to do!

It's referring to the character in the passage. "Taylor Metternich" I can't tell you for sure without seeing more of the story, but "Taylor hell" is saying it's a kind of hell caused by, or resembling, Taylor. and the "Blondest circle of hell." has to do with Taylor's Hair color. Blonde. (I'm guessing here.)

What I did today

I'm going to write about what I did today because I don't have any other better idea to write about.
I woke up at 11am and, like any other morning, I made a coffee. Today was my day off. I went to the mail store, I rented a movie and picked up something from the pharmacy. Then I came back home, I worked a little in the garden and I did a others little housework. I washed the dishes and then I studied a little for my English course. Getting into the end of the day I watched the movie that I had rented earlier and here I am. Doing a little more English practice before going to sleep. 

Great job! Only a couple things. You can't say "I made a coffee." It should be "I made coffee." Or "I made a cup of coffee." The word "Coffee" doesn't tell you how much, so you have to say how much or just say "I made coffee."

By mail store do you mean "Post Office"?

Are WhatsApp groups really helpful for language learning?

To be honest, I've never given it a try since I'm a cautious person and prefer to stay in my comfort zone. Not having an enough knowledge of the risks of joining such groups and not knowing the ways to be safe from them has made me avoid giving it a shot. Besides, I don't think the native speakers of the languages we like to learn, would join these this kinds of groups. This is another reason why WhatsApp groups don't seem very so helpful to me.

However, whenever I open the discussion section here, I come across at least one or two posts offering to become a member of these groups. At first, I decided to turn a blind eye to them. But the amount of these posts is considerably growing. To the point that I feel like I'm losing an amazing tool to improve my English.

Great job! Nothing really to correct. Just make things plural. When you talk about things "In general" (I'm not sure how to say this any clearer.) You need to pluralize.

travel or work before the university study

In many countries, when students graduated from high school, their parents will encourage them to work or travel for a year before they go to the university.

Some people claim that there are it has more advantages to work or travel before the university study. First of all, work and travel experience enable the young people to improve their soft skills. If the students stay at school all the time rather than travel to other cities or take a job, they might have less opportunities to communicate with the adults, which restricts the development of their skills for of communicating with different people. Moreover, the young people's problem solving skills will be improved when they are handling some complex problems in their jobs.

Besides that, work or travel experience builds more independent personality for the students. When the students study at school, their teachers always give them a plenty of useful advice, on contrary, they have to make decisions or choices by themselves when they are working doing the job or on a trip. It encourages the youth youngth to think more independently.

However, the others argue that travel or work before the university study might have some disadvantages. The travel and work experience makes people distracted attracted by the fresh things and they will find it is harder to concentrate on their academic research in the university. But the most students with good self-control skills will get used to the university study soon.

In conclusion, although the experience of travel and work before the university study has a limited disadvantage, I believe that the students will benefit more from it.

You could also write "Some people are attracted by the fresh things that come with the travel and work experience and they will find it is harder to concentrate on their academic research in the university."

Great work!

Pls Fill In the Blanks

This week I asked my classmates about their vacations.Here(are  )some of their answers.

Lisa went to Sydney, Australis. The weather was sunny and the people were friendly ( towards)her. She went to Sydney Opera House. It's wonderful.She had a great vacation.

Lili went to visit her aunt. At first the weather was rainy and wet. She had to stay at home. She watched TV but the TV showes were boring. Later on the weather got(better). So she went shopping with her aunt. The shop assistants were all friendly and kind. She bought something nice for( her aunt? Boyfriend? There's no correct answer here. ).