Those busy days
This April has been busy for me, the study became harder because the graduation and the final exam closer. The teachers told we should save the time to study everyday, and they think it is bad for us to use internet during you need to try harder to study. (,,•́ . •̀,,)
The exams became more and more, and the sky kept raining. I even have no friends to say about the pressure because they have the same trouble.
Also, I know near the final exam there will be a lot of pressure, hope I can deal with that on a right way.
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Those busy days
This April has been busy for me, the studying became harder because the graduation and the final exam are closer. The teachers told us we should save the time to study everyday, and they think it is bad for us to use the internet while studying during you need to try harder to study. (,,•́ . •̀,,)The exams became more and more frequent, and it the sky kept raining. I even have no friends to say about the pressure because they have the same trouble.
Also, I know that near the final exam there will be a lot of pressure, hope I can deal with that one a right way.
Pretty good! Only a few things.
You say "Studying became harder." but you would use "the" if you were saying the study of something specific. For example, "The studying of math became harder."
You don't say "The graduation" you can say "The graduation ceremony" or "The graduation party." but not just "the graduation."
"the sky kept raining" sounds a bit strange.
I even have no friends to say about the pressure because they have the same trouble. <-(I don't know what this means.)
Overall, Great job!
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