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    My experience last weekend

    Last weekend I wrote a notebook about my experiences that day. But the tragedy was that it didn't be submitted successfully submit !
    Maybe last next  time it will be better to write on a word document firstly.

    Today I want to write down it again because I very want to share my experience at regarding last weekend.
    It was a warm day with a blue sky and a breeze. I Me and my friend went to a park beside a lake to fly kites. I like flying a kites very much. The feeling when I pulled the rope and the kite flying in the sky very far was very well good . Just like I am flying by myself, my heart will follow it [I'm not entirely clear of the meaning here. If you could write this sentence differently maybe I could help you rephrase.

    When we took the bus back, I spoke with my friend all in English.(we could understood  understand each other, even though our oral English was not native). I found a it different things, ; when we talked in English I felt he was different compared to when with we spoke in Chinese. It was just like talking to somebody strange.


    Good work Selina! If you've any questions about the corrections feel free to ask!!

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    April 7, 2016
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    TOEIC

    I haven't been studying English lately. When I spoke English with my friends last weekend, I was so shocked. I noticed I had forgetten many words, and much vocabulary and grammar. And I couldn't speak English well... so I booked the TOEIC on next month! I bought a text :) it's the first time I will take the TOICE. I have to study hard again!!!


    Good job! Study hard! It's always tricky getting the quantifiers correct (many is for singular nouns and much for plural nouns), as well as the tenses (you used the word 'forgetting' as if it was happening now, but it would have been more correct to write that you 'had forgotten' as the forgetting happened in the past). 

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    April 6, 2016
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    She is My Family!

    Hello everyone! I'm Yumi :) I'm studying English. There are these days that I have begun to study English in earnest. English is studied at  junior high school and high school in Japan, but I was hardly studying it/English then ( The reason that I have begun to study English is I often talk with an overseas customer for my work. And I think more my world if [Not exactly sure what the meaning is here - are you saying that you can "know more of the world" or can "experience more of the world" ??]  I can speak English, because it is a common language :) I'd like to be a friend who can speak English. Please correct me if I'm wrong [What you have written here is technically correct, but it would be more accurate to write something like "Please correct my mistakes" rather than "Please correct me if I am wrong". This is because using the word 'wrong' here suggests the ideas are incorrect, rather than the English being incorrect"]- I would love to help with your Japanese! Message me & let' talk! Thank you :)

    A dog of this picture is my family! I love her! Her name is Marron! Because Her body hair is light brown :) So cuuuuuute!


    You're doing really well Yumi! Keep it up, and sorry if the corrections are a little bit pedantic!

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    April 6, 2016
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    Yep!
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    April 6, 2016
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