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My experience last weekend Last weekend I wrote a notebook about my experiences that day. But the tragedy was it didn't be submitted successful ! Maybe last time it will be better to write on word document firstly. Today I want to write down it again. Because I very want to share my experience at last weekend. It was a warm day with blue sky and breeze. I and my friend went to a park beside a lake to fly kites. I like flying a kite very much. The feeling when I pulled the rope and the kite flying in the sky very far was very well . Just like I am flying by myself, my heart will follow it. When we took the bus back, I spoke with my friend all in English.(we could understood each other, even though our oral English was not native). I found a different things, when we talked in English I felt he was different with we spoke in Chinese. Just like somebody strange.

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My experience last weekend

Last weekend I wrote a notebook about my experiences that day. But the tragedy was that it didn't be submitted successfully submit !
Maybe last next  time it will be better to write on a word document firstly.

Today I want to write down it again because I very want to share my experience at regarding last weekend.
It was a warm day with a blue sky and a breeze. I Me and my friend went to a park beside a lake to fly kites. I like flying a kites very much. The feeling when I pulled the rope and the kite flying in the sky very far was very well good . Just like I am flying by myself, my heart will follow it [I'm not entirely clear of the meaning here. If you could write this sentence differently maybe I could help you rephrase.

When we took the bus back, I spoke with my friend all in English.(we could understood  understand each other, even though our oral English was not native). I found a it different things, ; when we talked in English I felt he was different compared to when with we spoke in Chinese. It was just like talking to somebody strange.


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