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    Det er vanskelig å si hvordan skal verden <strike>være verden</strike> skal være <strike>til</strike> om femti år. Selv om jeg er redd for hva verden kan bli,
    håper jeg at verden vil forandres til det bedre, mens dessverre andre ting blir <strike>andre</strike> verre. Som for eksempel:

    For det første tror jeg at verden blir ganske avansert <strike>om</strike> i teknologi mens vi lever med global oppvarming.
    Bøke<strike>ne</strike>r skal være (blir) museumprodukter og <strike>særlig vil</strike> ingen skal lese<strike>r</strike> dem. Det vil ikke være religion og folk blir bort fra hverandre (jeg forstår ikke helt hva du mener her) .

    For det andre skal <strike>det</strike> samfunnet være mer kapitalistisk, ulykkelig og <strike>kynettet</strike> knyttet til teknologi<strike>er</strike>.
    Derfor bevege<strike>lse</strike>r seg folk <strike>seg</strike> hele<strike>n</strike> tiden fra et sted til det andre.
    Jeg tror at medisin<strike>er</strike> vil utvikle seg mye (kraftig) og vi vil leve<strike>nde</strike> i et hundre år og det <strike>blir</strike> skal være vanlig.

    For det tredje skal det være (komme) nye, billige og rikelige energikilder for alle, som for eksempel kjernekraften (kjerneenergi).
    Jeg <strike>hørte</strike> har hørt om dette i en dokumentar av TED på nettet.
    Dessuten skal ingen kjøre bile<strike>n</strike>r, fordi bile<strike>ne</strike>r blir autonomi<strike>en</strike>ske. Vi kan se på You Tube Teslabiler som Kjører alene i USA.
    Deretter vil robotikken gå videre til høyere nivåer.

    Til slutt tror jeg at landene vil <strike>bli</strike> eie<strike>re</strike> nesten alle produksjonsmidler og befolkningen <strike style="">kunne</strike> skal ikke være i stand til å jobbe.
    Resultatet skal <strike>det</strike> være at befolkningen vil leve med en grunnlønn (hva er det?) og de som ønsker å jobbe vil ha mulighet <strike>av</strike> å gjøre det fra hjemme.
    Dermed kan ikke alle <strike>ikke</strike> gjøre det!
    Alt i alt håper jeg at det vil ikke være mer konflikter <strike>for</strike> rundt mat, vann og olje i verden.
    <strike>Avslutningsvis</strike> (det er svensk) For å oppsummere håper jeg at <strike>mannen</strike> menneskehet blir oppmerksom og begynner å skape alternativer for å redusere global oppvarming.

    Jeg er ikke norsk,men man sier at jeg har et godt nivå og jeg håper at jeg har hjulpet deg litt :)
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    June 4, 2018
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    CAE Proposal - feedback please

    Hi, I am taking soon CAE exam, so I would very much appreciate if somebody gave me a feedback of proposal below (the best would be with CAE criteria).Thank you in advance!

    Task:You are a member of club that now needs to raise an amount of money. In preparation for a club meeting you have been asked to write a proposal to the other members. Your proposal should explain what the money is needed for and suggest ways in which the money could be raised.

    Introduction
    Our sports club has been running already for already 30 years and it has always been always very successful, but recently lately we are struggling with our expenses and we desperately need some financial support. The principal aims of this proposal are to identify our needs which require the financial support and to provide suggestions how the money for the sports club could be raised.

    Current situation
    Since the moment our club has been established, our gym has not been reconstructed nor renewed. The ceiling of thy gym is ancient (you can't use "ancient" regarding the ceiling. A temple or a palace can be ancient, not a ceiling) and I am afraid it might fall is in danger of falling down soon. Moreover, our equipment is so weary wornt out that is not safe for our athletes anymore and it is can rather to put their health in the at risk. Therefore, we are in an urgent need of money which would enable us to fix that.

    Recommendations
    I would strongly suggest asking for subsidies from our government, which provides many grant programs for health and sport and, without doubt, we would fit in the requirements of some of those. Other option would be a higher membership fee, which is paid by members every month, so it would cover at least the expenses for equipment and ensure athlete´s athlets' safety. Additionally, some money could be earned by organisation of organising run marathons for public, which is highly popular now.

    Conclusion
    I am convinced that if the above mentioned suggestions are implemented, the situation is bound to improve in very near the nearest future. Not only (be careful with this constructions, it presupposes usinf inversion) that after this implementation we will have money will we have money for high-tech equipment after the implementation, but also we will be sure of safety of our members' safety.

    I have taken CPE not so long ago and we didn't have proposal there, but I have checked the criteria and yours seems quite well-written. Just mind the small mistales and I'm sure you'll get a good grade :)

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    June 3, 2018
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    Австралийская зима

    Я живу в Австралии. Австралия находится в южном полушарии,  поэтому у нас сейчас зима так у нас зимой теперь. Люди думают, что в Австралии же жарко каждый день—это миф! Или что «в этомй стране никогда не идёт снег». А в моем городе иногда идёт снег! Каждое утро туманное, и дороги ледяные покрыты льдом. Нам надо водить машину осторожно. Чтобы согреться, нам надо разжечь разжигать огонь каждый вечер, и нам надо носить теплую одежду.
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    June 3, 2018
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    я больна (лучше сказать "я болею")

    Я больна (Я болею). Я кашляю уже неделю (если я правильно поняла). Я не могу выйти на улицу, и поэтому мне очень скучно.
    Сейчас я пойду в кафе и,надеюсь, что я скоро буду чувствовать себя хорошо.
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    June 2, 2018
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    I have taken CPE a couple of months ago, so I would advise the textbook series "Upstream", as it is created specifically for this exam. Also, try to watch tutorials on Youtube on how to take the oral part correctly. There are special books from Cambridge University press that contain past papers. Although, I don't really see the need to buy them, as you can find most of them online for free :D

    And I don't even know if you can find those in the States, as they usually don't accept the results of Cambridge exams there and always ask to take TOEFL.

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    June 2, 2018
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    Selfie Sticks

    Because of selfie popularity, many people have purchased a selfie stick lately recently. Nevertheless, some people argue that they should not be allowed to do that, since they bother the rest of the other people and it may be dangerous. Personally, I agree that they are annoying in some situations, but I do not think they should be banned everywhere.
    I think selfies are very enjoyable, therefore I like selfie sticks, because they are a simple but effective gadgets that helps you a lot when taking this kind of pictures. However, I feel that selfie sticks should not be allowed at football stadiums or concerts, since they block people’s view and could easily hurt someone. Furthermore, selfie sticks should definitely be banned at museums, because they could damage artworks if the user is not careful, and restaurants, since they would surely prevent waiters from working properly.
    In conclusion, I believe that selfie sticks should not be allowed when they are either a danger, a bother or an obstacle to others. Apart from the places already mentioned, selfie sticks are usually a brilliant and very convenient invention.
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    June 2, 2018
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    I would advise concentrating a bit less on the actual studying and trying to hang out more with foreign students. Do something fun together and trust me your English will get much better than from just attending classes!
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    June 1, 2018
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    1. Не понимаю вопроса, "расходы" же уже идет в мн.ч.
    2. Можно, только там будет "change the goal's setting"
    3. Лучше assign a task
     Вообще с такими вопросами посоветую пользоваться мультитраном
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    June 1, 2018
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    Я сейчас с девушкой в Италии, на острове Сардиния. Здесь все очень красиво; природа, море, старая деревня. Мы живём в тихой гостинице. Вы знали, что здесь есть город, который называется Алгеро, где люди всё еще говорят по-каталански?
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    June 1, 2018
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    Hello everyone. Now, we are in Iwata city, my hometown. It is located in the Western part of Shizuoka prefecture and its population is 169,927 people. And it is 163.4km² (it covers an area of 163,4 km2).

    Iwata city has a famous soccer team and well-known athletes. Do you know "jubilo Iwata"?

    This is a proffetional soccer team in Iwata. They motivate children to dream big.

    Furthermore, it is also famous for table tennis. Have you heard of Jun Mizutani and Mima Ito, professional table tennis players? Both of them are from Iwata. They play big roles in the world as Japanese representatives.

    Then, I have a question, "who am I?"(showing by doing gestures) That's right!!

    I am Ayumu Goromaru!! His American football team is located in Iwata. Did you know that?

    In conclusion, though Iwata is a small city, a lot of great persons live here!!

    Why don't you come to my hometown?

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    June 1, 2018
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