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    生词: 抽

    我很忙今天很忙.

    我正在学生词.

    我给你不能为你抽出时间.

    我们以后(=later)有时间再来谈话(use 聊天 will be more colloquial)吧将来.
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    April 14, 2016
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    “throw-away” society This is a practice of IELTS writing exam. Question: Many people say that we have developed into a "throw-away" society, because we are filling up our environment with so many plastic bags and rubbish that we cannot fully dispose of. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? My essay: Disposable goods like single-use plastic bags are widely use in our daily life. There are some people argue that we have developed into a “throw-away” society. I truly agree this idea. The using of disposables goods has a great impact on the environment. Try to image that if everyone uses a dental floss or a plastic bag a day. How many rubbish will be thrown away a day? Nevertheless the fact is that we are throwing far more than a dental floss or a plastic bag each day. In addition, disposable goods are mainly made by plastic and wood. It will take a long time for plastic degradation and trees regrow. So disposables are truly polluted our environment. Other people may argue that we had the technology of garbage recycling. The rubbish can be disposed completely and if we use that we would not developed a “throw-away” society. However, we can not recycle all the rubbish though we have that technology. Not everyone can classify the garbage consciously. And developing countries may not be able to afford the cost of recycling. The costs of recycling are far more than buying reusable things. In sum, I hold the view that we had developed into the “throw-away” society. We have to control our desire of using disposables and use reusable things to replace it. For example, environment-friendly bag is a good choice to replace plastic bags. Plus, governments can enforce stricter laws to control the use of single-use-only things at the same time.
    April 9, 2016
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    “一次性文化”作文思路 Many people say that we have developed into a "thorw-away" society, because we are filling up our environment with so many plastic bags and rubbish that we cannot fully dispose of. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 赞同: 1.一次性用品比如纸巾、塑料袋、一次性茶杯等等在我们的生活中已经被广泛使用;有些人认为我们已经进入“一次性”社会。我同意这个观点 2.赞同理由1:一次性物品的使用已经对环境造成了很大的污染。support:想想我们自己每天需要用到的一次性用品,假设我们每个人一天喝一瓶矿泉水,用一个塑料袋,使用三只牙签或者牙线,世界七十亿人口每天将会产生多少垃圾。而这些垃圾大部分是塑料,塑料很难降解;而另一类是木制品,树木需要很长的生长周期,所以使用一次性用品是对环境的极大破坏。 3.有人可能认为现在已经有垃圾分类和垃圾回收技术,我们使用的一次性用品可以被回收再利用,只要这样的技术运用得好,我们不会成为“一次性”社会。 4.然而就算我们有垃圾回收技术,但是也不可能完全利用这些一次性用品。况且并不是所有人都能做好垃圾分类,也不是所有国家都有能力承担垃圾回收利用的资金。就算利用垃圾回收技术,这样的消耗仍然远大于我们使用重复使用的用品的消耗来得多。 5.总之,我觉得我们确实已经步入了“一次性社会”。我们必须通过提高环保意识,尽量不使用一次性用品,已经政府控制使用一次性用品的方式来改善现状。
    April 7, 2016
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    亲爱的中国朋友又需要你们帮助!请查看我的笔译,有错误的话尽量修改 ^_^。预知谢意!

    保险,飞行,接送服务。
    绿波旅行有限公司连同"Unica"保险公司提供旅行保险服务。
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    如需要绿波旅行有限公司连同"Travel Service"航空公司会提供包机航班从中国到捷克。
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    到达后中文导游接客人,确认每一位客人都在,有将客人乘舒适的巴士将客人安全送达酒店。全程中文导游将为客人服务。如需要客人可以预定豪华的汽车。
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    住宿
    在捷克有很多各种各样的酒店,我们将保留房间在如何为你们选择的酒店保留房间。
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    旅游项目
    布拉格徒步旅行
    每一个角落,每一个古老布拉格的石头都充满了历史
    你有机会漫步在著名的瓦茨拉夫广场,看到城市的市民会馆和火药塔。
    漫步在著名的皇家之路,我们带您到老镇广场,在老镇广场会看到老市政厅和独一无二的布拉格天文钟。
    然后过跨越伏尔塔瓦河的查理大桥,会发现自己在布拉格神奥的小城小路(wrong! but i don't know what you want to say, so i can not revise it),上在古老的城堡的楼梯上您会可以看到捷克皇帝和国王的宫殿,以及您还会看到圣维特主教座堂和圣维特主教座堂。布拉格富丽的建筑遗产会在您的记忆中给您留下难忘的经历。
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    伏尔塔瓦河游船
    为欣赏布拉格美景,我们推荐您乘坐伏尔塔瓦河游船。
    我们推荐您乘坐晚班船, 因为建筑物, 、墙壁及桥梁映照出来的光影会给您与白日完全不同的的视觉享受(perfect)。
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    卡尔施泰因城堡游览
    卡尔施泰因城堡由神圣罗马帝国皇帝和波西米亚国王查理四世创建于 1348年。城堡成为王权的标记宝库。您有机会漫步在城墙之后,看到圣瓦茨拉夫的王冠的副本 (原本在布拉格城堡,展出五年一次)。天气好的时候您可以在乘坐热气球,飞起来从鸟瞰看到城堡。
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    克倫洛夫游览
    波西米亚南部美丽的地区是世界著名的浪漫城堡和中世纪城镇。
    您能参观捷克最美丽的城堡 - 伏爾塔瓦河畔赫盧博卡。伏爾塔瓦河畔赫盧博卡以文艺复兴室内装饰著称,这座城堡的美丽令每一个人为之倾倒。以及您能看到波西米亚的明珠,这是捷克克鲁姆洛夫——一座梦幻董话小城, 克鲁姆洛夫位于在伏尔塔瓦河的起源,在波希米亚南部的舒马瓦山岳和布兰斯基森林之间,建筑遗风被原封不动地保留了下来而成为欧洲中部中世纪古城的一个杰出典范。该城市于1992年被联合国教科文组织列为世界文化遗产之一。
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    库特納霍拉游览
    库特納霍拉中心是欧洲性的建筑遗产,所以在1995年库特納霍拉被联合国教科文组织列入世界文化遗产名录。您有机会看到13世纪末时最活力和最富裕的城市之一,在中世纪这边里(more formal)掘了三分之一全欧洲的银,这边位于著名的圣芭芭拉的大教堂和造币厂,、鼠疫柱,、人骨教堂 以及其他名姓古迹都位于此。
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    April 6, 2016
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    April 6, 2016
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    violent movies and computer games This is a writing practice of IELTS test. Question: Nowadays, films and computer games containing violence are popular. Some people think those films and games have negative effects on society and should be banned, while others think they are just harmless relaxation. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Adding violent elements in movies and computer games is a effective way to attract people using by movies director and computer games maker. There are conflicting views on whether those films and games should be banned or not. Those who believe violent movies and games should be prohibited hold the view that adolescents will misunderstand the main ideas of movies. Many children can not comprehend what is justice in those movies. Instead, they just imitate the forcible actions. They consider themselves as the heroes in the movie, so they can punish bad person whatever they want. In addition, those movies and games may cause adolescents’ mentally precocity. Violence plots will take out their imaginations of the beautiful world. They try to deal with things like a boss in the movies because they want to be one in their own life. Others people argue that those movies and games are just entertainment. There are few people will live in the fictional world. Violence elements in movies can make audience feel excited and they can help to release pressure. And some violence plots can be impressive and revealing, which can trigger audiences’ sympathy for the suffer and appreciations of heroes. In sum, there are some truth in both of them. Adding some violence elements in movies and games is a great way to attract audiences. But for adolescents and children, it is really harmful. So I think the best way to keep the balance is to enforce the laws of rating films and computer games.
    March 29, 2016
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    会 vs 能 vs 可以, can vs can vs can

    1. 会
    我会读这本书。
    他不会写字,他必须打字。
    我不会打橄榄球 (because i don't know the rules)——因为我不懂don't know规则rules

    2. 能
    我能打乒乓球打得很好。
    我不能跟你出去因为我感冒了。
    他不锻炼了,所以他不在能再帮你出操。——再=again不再=any more

    3. 可以
    我可以不可以来上课不迟到吗?——‘可以不可以’is a question, 吗is a question too. you don't need to use both of them. better expression: 你来上课可以不迟到吗?
    你可以给我额外(的)时间吗?
    你可以帮我(help me)点我一份西红柿炒饭吗?
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    March 29, 2016
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    我想什麼東西? 怎麼辦?

    我想什麼東西? 怎麼辦?

    其實, 大部分我不知道。(i don't understand what you want to say) 現在我剛剛有一個點子(I think you want to say 'I got a idea just now' but "just "剛剛 and ‘now’現在 can not use in a sentence, because 剛剛 is past tense, but 現在 is present tense. delete “現在”, because 剛剛= just now),每一天我需要起床就需要喝咖啡和(u can use 然後)寫(u use two verb in a sentence, delete one)在我的日記裡面, (do not need this)寫一個文章。

    所以,這是我的文章。以前,我要每一天寫。 以前,每一天寫一個英文的文章。(these two sentences express the same meaning)點子從一本書裡面得到。雖然我還沒讀,但是他的意思我這道知道(wrong spelling)。那本書的書名是「藝術的(use之)道」(The Artist’s Way). 就是有一個意思是比如說你要進步你的創造性(don't know what you want to say),你需要每一(delete this)天寫。

    別想太多,就寫。

    就寫。我要什麼東西? 我要太多。我想留在台北,但是我厭煩台北的天氣。我想搬家去高雄。 我也想搬家去舊金山。我也想旅遊很多(去很多地方旅遊)。

    怎麼辦?

    我想愛我的女朋友。有的時候,我想結婚她(和and她結婚)。我想有小孩子。但是有的時候我想念一個人的生活, 想著一對沒有自由。

    怎麼辦?

    有的時候我不知道怎麼學中文。有的時候我不知道為什麼我想學中文。但是現在我的中文水平是中級的。我可以用中文,我可以聊天一點(聊一點天),但是還需要進步的很多。 需要我的中心放在哪裡?寫字?文法?閱讀?聽力?說話? 太多生詞我還沒學。

    怎麼辦?


    中心放在文法吧!文法不對的話很難理解你要說的是什麼

    I think you should concentrate on grammar.  people can not understand your sentences if your grammar is wrong. but if you spell some words wrong, we can guess it

    my grammar is poor too :(

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    March 29, 2016
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