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    我的工作日

    我每天早上七点起床。先(it's not suitbale to use this adj”先“ in this sentence)我早饭一般喜欢吃麦片。 然后早上八点半我坐火车去上班。 接下来我下午两点在公司外边的公园吃鸡肉三明治。 我下班以后(you should put a preposition here, ex.“在”)火车上学习汉语。我一般晚上七点回家。 我晚饭最喜欢吃自己做得(”的“should replace ”得)披萨饼。我吃完晚饭以后看电影。最后我一般晚上十一点睡觉。


    prefect writing, you can express yourself clearly by Mandrain. 

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    Yseterday I saw the movie Harry Poter again

    Yesterday after a great house cleaning(形容词用的不对) I saw the movie Harry Poter again.
    When I saw Harry misconstrued Snape I coudn`t help shouting at my computer screen: Harry! He is potecting you!
    It`s amzing that after so many years when I saw the movie I still got moved by some details, even I knew what will(时态不一致) happen the next second.
    I think it`s high time for me to read its novels again even most(part of it) of them I can`t total understand.
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    Discuss your post-MBA career aspirations (short term and long term) and explain your plan As a management trainee of Hilton, I started career and became a cost control supervisor. With experience accumulated, I became the youngest manager in the hotel. During career, I kept cost rate below the budget for 11 months, became a member of hotel’s internal control committee, and maintained purchase price below the average level of local hotels. On the other hand, I’m an outdoor-sports enthusiast, who is crazy about Tibet. I was impressed by Tibetan scenery, mysterious culture and simplicity of Tibetan. I uncovered Tibetan tourism value but undeveloped economy. Indigenes found jobs far from their home. Therefore in short term, I hope I can join internal consulting department of a hotel group and in long term, I hope to found a boutique hotel brand with Tibetan theme, helping prompting local economy, providing handy jobs for indigenes and disseminating Tibetan culture. Here is my plan to achieve to my goals. . Firstly, I need more financial knowledge. Now I’m working on getting a CMA certificate, which promotes me to think as a managerial accountant. I also asked my supervisor for cross-training in finance department. In the meantime, CEIBS’ MBA curriculums, such as “Corporate Finance”, Financial Statement Analysis” and “Entrepreneurial Finance” will fulfill my eagerness for expertise and equipped me as a qualified internal consultant. Second, I’m lack of macro-management skills. Now I’m a member of hotel’s internal control committee. I was trained by Ernst &Young and completed perfection of 30+ monitoring points. Similarly, CEIBS’ MBA program offers me essential entrepreneurship training and instruction from EMBA student, bringing me overall picture of company operation and necessary network. The ICSP provides me strategic view. Most importantly, after a conversation with Afra Wang (2016 MBA-HHM program), I’m interested in the coordinated program, which will deepen my exploration into hospitality industry.
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