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Yseterday I saw the movie Harry Poter again Yesterday after a great house cleaning I saw the movie Harry Poter again. When I saw Harry misconstrued Snape I coudn`t help shouting at my computer screen: Harry! He is potecting you! It`s amzing that after so many years when I saw the movie I still got moved by some details, even I knew what will happen the next second. I think it`s high time for me to read its novels again even most of them I can`t total understand.

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Yseterday I saw the movie Harry Poter again

Yesterday after a great house cleaning(形容词用的不对) I saw the movie Harry Poter again.
When I saw Harry misconstrued Snape I coudn`t help shouting at my computer screen: Harry! He is potecting you!
It`s amzing that after so many years when I saw the movie I still got moved by some details, even I knew what will(时态不一致) happen the next second.
I think it`s high time for me to read its novels again even most(part of it) of them I can`t total understand.
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Yesterday I saw the movie Harry Potter again

Yesterday after a great house cleaning I saw the movie Harry Potter again.
When I saw Harry misunderstanding Snape I couldn`t help shouting at my computer screen: Harry! He is protecting you!
It`s amazing that after so many years when I saw the movie I still got moved by some details, even if I knew what would happen in the next second.*
I think it`s high time for me to read the novels again even though most of them I can`t fully understand.

*or, ... would happen next.

Very well written!

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Yesterday I saw the movie Harry Potter again

Yesterday after a great house cleaning I saw the movie Harry Poter again.
When I saw Harry misconstrued Snape I couldn't help shouting at my computer screen: 'Harry! He is protecting you!'

It`s amazing that after so many years when I saw the movie I still got moved by some details, even though I knew what will happen the next second.
I think it`s high time for me to read the novels again even though most of them I can`t totally understand.

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