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- A new day begins with a cup of rose tea Every morning after I get up I would like to make a cup of rose tea for myself. With the excellent fragrance of rose fllowing in my room, my lazy body is waking up and be ready to face the new challenges of each day. Tea made of flowers is very popuar among Chineses women who want to enjoy the smell and look forward to a more beautiful appearence. Have you ever had flower tea in your country?
March 21, 201620 - Note01: Topic today is about traditional therapy for colds in China This is my first wrighting in italki and hope to carry on in the next few months. I felt a little ache and dry in my throat when I wake up this morning.This feeling was so familiar and I knew I may catch a cold again, which makes me think back the childhood when I hate the bad taste of medicine pills and my family have to think about some other methods to alleviate my uncomfortable. The first method is the most common used all over the world: drink hot water as frequency as possible! What's more, the water mu parents prepared for me is so hot that I feel a little hurt over my tongue but very useful for my sore throat. The second method is "Gua Sha", I am not clear how to speak it in English. It takes a piece of smooth ox horn or coin as tool, each time before you use this tool to scarp on one's back you should put on a little white over the surface of the tool. Remember to scarp heavily so that the back is totally hot and red. Nowadays, Gua Sha is not only used to cure colds but also in some other physical therapy. The third is Cupping. What a weird name in English. Briefly speaking, we light a fire (you can use a piece of paper, but in China we will use some herb which I have forgotten...) in a cup, then upsidedown the cup and press it on one's back heavily. It is obvirously that the fire will go out when oxgen beside these cups is used up. The most interesting part is that, the hot air in the cups keep stimulating your back and your back is absorbed into those cups which even makes you a little hurt. After all these cups cool down we bring them off your dotted back and then have a good sleep. All the three methods are useful for colds and some other diseases caused by cold weather.
March 19, 201620 转基因食品
转基因食品一直引起争议。对我来说, 如果是 正确的进行的, 转基因多于弊端利大于弊。
转基因食品能让我们大型大规模生产食品,无论承受什么气候什么环境条件。 目前, 在我们世界上有八亿人为了有健康和积极的生活没有足够的食品吃,不能保证健康和积极的生活。 绝大多数都住在发展中国家, 这些国家的环境一般来说对不适合作物生长不合适
当然我们不仅一定要对谨慎对待转基因食品需要慎重, 但是对待任何食品都需要慎重, 天然的意思不一定是安全的, 还有危害身体的可能性。比如说,有的人对某种食品过敏, 乳糖不耐症,乳糜泻等。 其实但是, 由于转基因技术的进步,这些人现在能随意地吃可以改良这些食物,使得人们不再对其过敏。
转基因食品都要通过严格的评估, 看他确保它们对人类的健康和环境有没有影响。 实际上, 一般来说, 自然的食品没有这样的调查检测。 这样因此我们说,转基因食品 可能是更有安全的。
总而言之, 只要在认真条件下我们严谨认真地对待转基因食品,转基因食品带来的好处能永远改变改善我们的生活, 确保我们的食品不仅是够充足, 还有对身体很好有益。Remarks: You have rich vocabulary and can express your meaning very well. You used "无论..." “不仅...还...” to make readers easier to understand. What's more, you used "对我来说”"目前""当然"“比如说”“一般来说”“总而言之”through the paper which guarantees the fluent expression. Be careful that donot use too many in a single sentense, for example, you adopt both "实际上" and “一般来说" in the beginning of a sentense which is not recommended.
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