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    An essay about Coffee

    Today, I would like to talk to you about one of my hobbies: coffee.

    But I’m warning you, I can talk about it during several times! I am going to try to be concise.

    As for me, coffee is a very interesting drink. It represents a good way to easily discover many different countries in the world within a reasonable budget.

    First of all, coffee is a historic drink: born in Africa in the middle of the fifteenth century, it was introduced in Europe later, in the sixteenth century. It’s interesting to see that this drink has followed the development of our modern society. In fact, It has replaced the beer, as the main drink, and contributes to reducing the alcoholism.

    Secondly, coffee is an international product which concerns people all around the world: it’s a global product (repetitive). But unfortunately, we can see that the producers are in the south and the drinkers are in the North. Aware of that, I try to privilege (to use? What do you mean by privilege?) the ethical coffee. The ethical coffee is a coffee which reaches a better redistribution of the selling price. The goal is to offer better living conditions to the farmer. Of course, It is more expensive than the coffee without a label but the consequences are very important for many people. It’s a serious concern for me when I drink a coffee.

    Moreover, drinking a coffee is a very pleasant experience for me: it’s like when an old man smokes a cigar or when you drink a famous glass of wine: it’s taste test time : I smell the coffee and try to understand their aromatic structures. I’m very stunned by the number of flavours (<-this is the UK spelling) offered by this product. Do you know that coffee has more flavours than the wine? All that for a very reasonable price!

    After this pleasurable time, often shared with my wife during the breakfast, I feel good, very concerned. The day can start!

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    September 14, 2018
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    Collapsology part two

    Environmental changes

    Let’s focus on this first element. The first thing in mind is global warming but it is not the sole problem, it is more complicated than that. If the temperature rises more than 2°C, the snowball effect will rise the temperature to 4 or 5°C and this would mean the end of the humanity and all life in the planet.

    I know I sound like mister apocalypse but let me explain. The first problem is the ice melt that will result in a rise in sea level. Islands and coasts will be flooded. This will kill a lot of people but not everybody.

    The second problem is farming. It will be more difficult to farm because of the climate. This lack of food will lead to famines and wars. But this will not cause the end of the humanity.

    There are a lot of other issues with global warming like the feminization (What?) of the sea and a lot of species will not survive but I don’t have the knowledge to discuss all these problems in detail and I want to expose the most important issue but in a third part.
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    September 14, 2018
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    Create your own immersion at home - that means:

    -Watch shows and movies in English

    -Listen to Radio in English (this includes listening to English music)

    -Read books, news, articles, etc. in English

    -Change your phone language to English

    -Follow English pages on social media

    -Take lessons or find language partners and practice!



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    August 9, 2017
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    While you can certainly use "I should go?" as a question, more often I hear it as a statement. If you are asking somebody if you should leave, using "Should I go" sounds a little more natural. "Shall I go?" is somewhat more formal.
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    July 29, 2017
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    National Database of Resident Population

    Today I have translated a press article and I'd like to receive your corrections and comments on language and style. Thanks.

    The National Database of Resident Population (ANPR) is one of the major projects of the Italian Digital Agenda and aims at pouring into creating a single national database for all the population data, which are today managed today by each individual town. (Placed a period to make a new sentence here) In most present cases, at the present time, data cannot be queried directly with automated procedures, and; therefore, the verification of personal records can only be carried out by other public authorities and private entities only upon a town  the town’s specific request.

    One of the positive results consequences that will become evident as towns progressively join the database will be the possibility of any town issuing personal certificates without the limitation of being a resident in the place where the request is made. (Placed a period to make a new sentence here) as happens nowadays; Moreover, starting from the passage (from the passage? What do you mean to say?) to the national database, certificates issued by the town will contain data stored in the ANPR, and this will be stored with stated by a specific note.

    The passage is usually a procedure lasting only a few hours. What actually matters is the technical organisation of the passage (request and withdrawal of the smart card from the provincial prefecture, which grants access to the web apps too, installation of workstation certificates, etc.). and The organisation is especially important through the continual monitoring of notifications sent at the various stages that the management software connects with ANPR and the Inland Revenue Agency. (Placed a period to make a new sentence here) In fact, For example, the fiscal code – as in the case of a new born – is now generated at the moment the person is registered, therefore meaning all the information has to be validated in real time.


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    July 29, 2017
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    July 28, 2017
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    Greg REFUSED|DENIED to pay for the meal as it was to disgusting to eat. It seems that the both variants are correct. What is the difference? --> You could say both, but "refused" sounds more natural here. The REMNANT|LEFTOVER|SCRAP|WASTE metal dealer went around the houses collecting broken machines that people didn't want any more. OMG, I even cannot choose 2 words o_O -->"Scrap metal" is the most appropriate term here.
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    July 9, 2017
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    You can use "how are you doing" to add emphasis on asking how that person is feeling. However, "How are you" and "How are you doing" essentially mean the same thing.
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    April 29, 2017
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    Beach

    Woman Women and men. The water on the beach is frozen. watter gelé (gelé = frozen) I am a surfer on the water sur watter I have fallen. j'ai chuté mais ok good love
    You are eating on sur the beach in the sun.

    Vous devez utiliser un article indefini pour an titre ou position, par example, je suis docteur = I am a doctor. Ca sera comme "je suis un docteur".

    Pour les verb dans le present - on ne peut pas dire "you are eat", vous devez dire "you are eating" ou ca semble bizarre.

    Bonne chance


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    December 30, 2016
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    December 30, 2016
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