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我是一名来自中国佛山的大学学生,照片上的人就是我,现在主要在学习英语,一直在找寻学习英语快速有效的方法。最希望在这里找到一个能够互相修改日记的外国朋友,我帮助你学中文,你帮助我学英语,这样学习起来我想会很有趣的。
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    Go back home I'm home now. It has been a month for me away from my home, since the new term beginned. I'm tired now, so that's all. Good night!
    April 1, 2016
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    On Events of Network Public Opinion (my English assignment) Nowadays, because of the Internet, we can get the news happened all over the world easier and faster, at the same time, we can express our opinions directly, randomly and immediately. So, more and more events of notwork public opinion take place. In my opinion, there are some natural instincts of human, such as curiosity, which is the root of the events of notwork public opinion. Besides, the network has developed and the information can be spread faster. Just need a smart-phone or a computer, people can receive the information from any corners of the world. So, more and more people can satisfy themselves in curiosity. However, that is not enough. Human also need to express. At this time, notwork also makes human express freely and simply. As a result, more and more events of notwork public opinion take place. Just like every coins has two sides, the events of notwork public opinion also have their good influence and bad influence. On one hand, they probably form a fault opinion and misled others. On the other hand, they can cultivate civilians to think problems on their owns.
    March 31, 2016
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    I Will Change Myself Commonly, I always played my smart-phone or read out-class books when I have my classes. But, I suddenly realized that I was wasting my time and didn’t respect for my teacher. I should fellow my teacher, listen what he said, think what he asked and respond his questions. So I made a decision to change myself in the classes. I will pay my attention on what my teacher said and join the discussion in classes. I highly hope someone can help me correct it. What’s more, several writings I wrote some days ago have been corrected yet. Somebody said that you can form a habit if you can insist on doing it for 21 days. Up to now, it’s the eighteenth day I wrote a note everyday. I want to do it everyday in the future. So, if you are learning Chinese, I can help you and you can help me in English.( ̄▽ ̄)"
    March 30, 2016
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    我 有 一个 朋友。他 不会<font style="background-color: yellow;">好</font> 好说。一天 他 请<strike>客</strike> 四个 朋友们 <strike>在</strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">到</font>一个 饭店<font style="background-color: yellow;">吃饭</font>。<font style="background-color: yellow;">有</font>三个人 来 了,还 <font style="background-color: yellow;">有</font>一个人 没来。我 的 朋友 很 着急,他 说:该 来 的<font style="background-color: yellow;">还</font> 没 来 <strike>了</strike>。他一个朋友 听了<font style="background-color: yellow;">,</font><strike>他</strike> 对 自<font style="background-color: yellow;">己 </font>说:”什么?,他 的 意思 是 我 不 应该 来<strike>了</strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">?</font>好,我 <strike>离开</strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">走</font><strike>“。</strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">。”</font>所以 他 起<font style="background-color: yellow;">身</font>,走 <strike>外</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">出</font>了 饭店。 他 离开 的 时候,对 工作人员 说:”如果 我 的 朋友们 问,<strike>情 </strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">请</font>告诉 他们 我 走 了,别 等 我<font style="background-color: yellow;">了</font>“。一会<strike>人</strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">儿</font>,饭店 的 工作人员 对 我<font style="background-color: yellow;">的</font> 朋友 说:”你们 什么时候 要 吃 你们 的 菜?<font style="background-color: yellow;">你们的菜什么时候可以上is better</font>“我 朋友 说:”我们<strike> 应该</strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">要</font> 等<strike> 那个 人</strike> 刚才<font style="background-color: yellow;">出去</font>的那个人 <strike>出去 了</strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">回来</font>“。工作人员 说:”他 出去<strike> 了</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">的</font>时候,对 我们 说 他 不 会 回来<font style="background-color: yellow;">了</font>“。我 朋友 说:”不该 走的,走了“。他 一个 朋友 听了,<strike>他</strike> 想:”他 的 意思 是 我们 应该 走?好,我 也 会 <strike>离开</strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">走better</font>“。所以,他 也<font style="background-color: yellow;">站 </font>起来,走了。我 朋友 很 <strike>惊奇</strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">惊讶</font><font style="background-color: yellow;"></font>,问 他的 朋友 那 两个 人 为什么 走 了?他 的 朋友 说:”你 的 <strike>说</strike>话 让 他们 生气,你 不 应该 这 样 说。以后,你 应该 多 注意 你<strike>的</strike> 说<font style="background-color: yellow;">的话</font>“。我 朋友 说:”好,但是 我 的<font style="background-color: yellow;">话</font><strike> </strike>不是<font style="background-color: yellow;">指向</font> 他们“。 他的朋友 说:”什么?你<strike>的 意思</strike> 不是 <font style="background-color: yellow;">说</font>他们?你 的 意思 是 我?“<strike>,</strike> 他 也 离开 饭店 了。

    It's fuuny. 写的很好,但是有些语法错误,另外有两处没有没有语法错误,不过换种表达方式会更好。

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    March 29, 2016
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    We Won “Scored! Scored!” We yelled up when the Chinese team scored the first goal. This evening, it was the last chance that Chinese team can make it top 12 in Asia. Our opponent was Takhar, a country in West Asia, which is powerful playing football. The score was 0 to 0 in the first half. But, After a rest, we scored the first goal quickly, which made my roommates and me excited. Afterwards, we played in a steady-going way so that the Takher team had no choice to scored. In the end, we scored again and the score became 2 to 0. Finally, we won the game and made it top 12 in Asia!
    March 29, 2016
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    A Class Party This evening we had a class party notified a week ago. We all gathered at the square of school at 7:30 when it was already dark. At the beginning of the time, we decorated ourselves with light sticks. Gradually, the wind blew gently and the atmosphere among us was rising. After a few minutes, the first game began. All of us were divided into six groups and gamed drinking Coke and blowing balloons. After that, we sat down in a circle. We ate snacks, drank, sang songs and chatted with each other. In the end, we took a picture of all people.
    March 28, 2016
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    我在想是不是打错字了,所以,我看不懂这句话。我看这不太像是原文,你要不要仔细看看是不是抄错了。
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    March 27, 2016
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    Watching Friends Again I have loved to watch movies, especially English movies, since I learned English. In the past few years, I watched a movie a week on average. However, I still have to look at subtitles when I watch a movie, because all along, I watch English movies with subtitles. Today, I suddenly realized that I have to improve my English listening. At the time, Friends, an American TV series I have seen before, came out in my mind. So, I downloaded s set of Friends and watched it repeatedly. I payed more attention on their dialogue. When I have watched it several times I listen MP3 of it. I tried mt best to listen, at the same time, to recalled what happens in the American TV series. I hope that this method can work.
    March 27, 2016
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