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- 'Behavioural adaptation' is the subject and in the excerpt it is said that behavioural adaptation is more efficient than genetic adaptation. I believe 'being immediate and non-random' is a postmodifier but, whilst I am a native speaker, I have not studied English grammar extensively so don't quote me on that. It does not change the meaning of the sentence which is that 'behavioural adaptation is more efficient than genetic adaptation,' but it does give you more information about behavioural adaptation, namely that behavioural adaptation is 'immediate and non-random.'0 votedJuly 10, 20201
- green = correction<s style="background-color: rgb(240, 102, 102);">red</s> = deletionblue = my editing due to stylistic preference<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 102);">yellow</s> = my deletion due to stylistic preferenceDa<s style="background-color: rgb(240, 102, 102);">s</s>y off: Could you please check my writing?Today was my day off.In the morning<s style="background-color: rgb(240, 102, 102);">,</s> I did a lot of housework.After that, I did thirty minutes of exercise<s style="background-color: rgb(240, 102, 102);">s</s> and s<s style="background-color: rgb(240, 102, 102);">u</s>ang for fo<s style="background-color: rgb(240, 102, 102);">u</s>rty minutes.In the afternoon, I practiced the piano<s style="background-color: rgb(240, 102, 102);">.</s> <s style="background-color: rgb(240, 102, 102);">A</s>and then<s style="background-color: rgb(240, 102, 102);">,</s> I <s style="background-color: rgb(240, 102, 102);">have</s> finished reading a Japanese book.I read an English book for a little while.I practiced the piano once again.Could you please check my writing? Thanks in advance.0 votedJuly 7, 20202
- reen = correction<s style="background-color: rgb(240, 102, 102);">red</s> = deletionblue = my editing due to stylistic preference<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 102);">yellow</s> = my deletion due to stylistic preferencepurple = American spelling - > British spelling 😈<s style="background-color: rgb(240, 102, 102);">cl</s>Crash <s style="background-color: rgb(240, 102, 102);">l</s>Landing on <s style="background-color: rgb(240, 102, 102);">y</s>YouI <s style="background-color: rgb(240, 102, 102);">finished watching</s> have watched "<s style="background-color: rgb(240, 102, 102);">cl</s>Crash <s style="background-color: rgb(240, 102, 102);">l</s>Landing on <s style="background-color: rgb(240, 102, 102);">y</s>You" half way through<s style="background-color: rgb(240, 102, 102);">,</s> <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 102);">but</s> and I have genuinely got into it!!! I couldn't stop watching it yesterday. The story unfolds in North Korea 「first half of season」これどう言う意味ですか?. It truly depicts <s style="background-color: rgb(240, 102, 102);">a</s> the customs<s style="background-color: rgb(240, 102, 102);">,</s> and behaviour <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 102);">in</s> of North Korea <s style="background-color: rgb(240, 102, 102);">and</s> as well as how North Koreans live. It's very interesting. The drama isn't critical about NK. What I was most surprised by is an actress who is a North Korean defector is <s style="background-color: rgb(240, 102, 102);">on</s> in the drama. I thought the NK government would kill them if the government finds them<s style="background-color: rgb(240, 102, 102);">,</s> but maybe not, right?The solider <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 102);">guy</s>, who is the main character, is cold and has a stony<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 102);">e</s> face but actually his heart is warm. After he <s style="background-color: rgb(240, 102, 102);">fined</s> finds himself liking <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 102);">her</s> the heroine, he changes in <s style="background-color: rgb(240, 102, 102);">the more</s> an attractive way! I didn't think he was cool in the beginning<s style="background-color: rgb(240, 102, 102);">,</s> but now I like him! I want a guy like him who is manly, strong and always protects me. Unrealistic things happen<s style="background-color: rgb(240, 102, 102);">s</s> a lot in K-drama<s style="background-color: rgb(240, 102, 102);">,</s> but girls get into it somehow haha.0 votedJuly 6, 20201
- green = correction<s style="background-color: rgb(240, 102, 102);">red</s> = deletionblue = my editing due to stylistic preference<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 102);">yellow</s> = my deletion due to stylistic preferenceShutting dining rooms down againIt's reported that the number of restaurants shutting down their dining rooms is increasing in the United States, mainly due to customers who refuse to wear masks and react with violence when asked to do so. Debates over whether reopening businesses in the States was <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 102);">early</s> premature or not seems<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 102);">ed</s> understandable to me, but I don't get why some people are against wearing masks. Sure, you might be healthy<s style="background-color: rgb(240, 102, 102);">,</s> but if you walk around the street without a mask on, you <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 102);">are</s> risk making others worry, 'What if I catch COVID-19 from that person?'https://www.businessinsider.com/anti-mask-customers-force-some-restaurants-re-close-dining-rooms-2020-7최근에 미국에서 마스크를 쓰지 않겠다고 하는 손님들 때문에 다시 식당 다이닝룸을 닫기 시작하는 식당이 많아졌다고 해요. 미국에서 다시 경제 활동을 시작하느냐 마느냐에 대한 다른 의견들이 있는 것은 이해가 되는데 마스크는 쓰는 게 맞는 것 같아요. 물론 본인은 건강할 수 있지만, 본인이 마스크를 안 쓰고 돌아다니면 다른 사람들은 '저 사람 코로나바이러스 걸린 상태로 돌아다니는 것 아니야?' 하고 불안해할 수 있잖아요.0 votedJuly 6, 20201
- The amount of consumption in Thiland is more than that of Japan. —> Rice consumption in Thailand is more than in Japan. —> The amount of rice consumed in Thailand is more than in Japan. * If from the context it is obvious what you are talking about then you can omit the word 'rice'/'of rice' from the above sentences but it depends on what the previous sentence was. According to data of MAFF, while Japan consumes 7.9 million tons of rice per year, Thailand consumes 11.7 million tons of rice per year. —> According to MAFF data, while Japan consumes 7.9 million tons of rice per year, Thailand consumes 11.7 million tons of rice per year. —> According to data from MAFF, while Japan consumes 7.9 million tons of rice per year, Thailand consumes 11.7 million tons of rice per year. In addition, in terms of consumption per person, Thailand consumes 3.1 times as much rice as Japan. —> In addition, in terms of consumption per person, Thai people consume 3.1 times as much rice as Japanese people. —> In addition, in terms of consumption per capita, Thai people consume 3.1 times more rice than Japanese people.0 votedJuly 5, 20201
- green = correction<s style="background-color: rgb(240, 102, 102);">red</s> = deletionblue = my editing due to stylistic preference<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 102);">yellow</s> = my deletion due to stylistic preferenceWhat I did todayI baked a chiffon cheesecake. Unfortunately it separated into two layers. I think I should have mixed the ingredients more.I'll try it again next time!--> I'll try <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 102);">it again</s> doing it that way next time!「次に作る時そうする」と言う意味です--> I'll try making it again <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 102);">next time</s>!「また作ってみよう」と言う意味です0 votedJuly 5, 20200

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