Malaisia

I'm going to Malaysia tonight.
I hear that there are many delicious fruits.
Specially dragonfruit . It is different from another country's fruits.
It has purple inside. Also the taste is different.
I'm looking forward to eating it.

Personal statement

I’m achieving my goals because the most important goal of my life is to help to my world can be better. Since I was a boy I like to meet others cultures because we need to grow ways to work together, and accept different points of view the life and share our knowledge with other people, to did it  When I was 16 years old, I moved to another city, 5 hours far away from my family to finish  my High School in a small town inside my country. I was living in a student residence. It was a special experience, because I learned how to balance work and my studies at the same time, and that you need to work hard to obtain what you want. I worked for 3 years as a supervisor in a student residence and here I learned that you can be a leader if you work hard enough. Then I traveled to another city to get my undergraduate study. Iwas out of my comfort zone, and I needed to learn how you can to be self-sufficient quickly. I was living alone in a small apartment, but I thought that was a good opportunity to develop my skills. 

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Good so far Esleiker!

Practical writing

My mother disagrees with my opinion and thinks that studying everyday is not necessary.
That’s because studying everyday can then make my family have less time to communicate with us.
She feels boring recently when I’m only studying in my room.
She has found it hard for our family to speak of  more important personal issues with each other.
Therefore, my mother disagrees and feels that we should not study as much.

The strike through is for when i'm not really sure what you really want to say but nice job!

Thanks Anna!