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My mother disagrees with my opinion and thinks that study everyday are not necessary.
That’s because studying everyday can then make my family have less time to communicate with us.
She feels boring recently when I’m only studying in my room.
She has found it hard for our family to speak more important personal issues each other.
Therefore, my mother disagree that we should study too much.
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Practical writing
My mother disagrees with my opinion and thinks that studying everyday is not necessary.That’s because studying everyday can then make my family have less time to communicate with us.
She feels boring recently when I’m only studying in my room.
She has found it hard for our family to speak of more important personal issues with each other.
Therefore, my mother disagrees and feels that we should not study as much.
The strike through is for when i'm not really sure what you really want to say but nice job!
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My mother disagrees with my opinion* and thinks that studying everyday is not necessary.That’s because studying everyday** means less time for talking with the family.
She has felt bored recently when I’m always studying in my room.
She has found it hard for our family to speak about more important personal issues with each other.
She thinks that I study too much.
*or, ... disagrees with me and thinks..
**or, ... beacause it means less time ...
very well written!
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