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Essay #284 "Criminalization" 29.10.18
Over recent decades the level of crime rates only goes up and overall criminalization of population increases. Many people are concerned about this situation and they should be, as this affects our society in a highly negative way. There is not any panacea for this, however there is a certain way for the government to make this problem less severe.
First of all, we have to determine the main reasons (why this is happening/behind this). One of the most influential (reasons? or some other noun) is the social environment. People who live in a criminalized atmosphere just shaped by it (it=crime?), and in many cases end up being criminals. Also the upbringing and education play a very important role in this. Parental neglecting and the lack of attention only make this situation worse as this only raises chances for children to adopt negative behavioral traits. These two are basically the main causes of the criminalization of population and in order to solve the problem of the increase of crime rates we have to solve these issues.
One of the most beneficial and effective measures would be the governmental introduction of new initiatives which helped communities in the most criminalized areas. It will not only draw additional attention to these areas, but also provide people, who want to change their lives, with an opportunity to do that. Also some serious changes should be applied to the judicial system as often people who get in jail for minor crimes get out fully criminalized and cannot return to their previous lives. This system should concentrate more on correction rather than on punishment.
To conclude, the rise of crime rates is a serious problem for our society and the government should put all its effort into solving this. It is not an easy task and this cannot be solved in one step; it is a meticulous process which takes time. However, only by doing so will it be possible to create society that will be safe, crime free and in which people will be able to chose their own future.--
I know, articles are impossible! However, the expressions you use are great!
0 votedOctober 28, 20181A Day in Vladivostok (Russian city)
Hello to all!I have visited the Russian city named Vladivostok.
I think that few people here know something about that city.
So, I will try to write my thoughts about this city.
Vladivostok is located on the east part of the Russian Federation and it is a city with big sea ports.
China is established (located?) very nearby about this city (I see how I cant't find a right word to describe a word like "establish").
Vladivostok has two big bridges.
One of them connects the separated part of the city with a Russian island (?). This is a very beautiful island with amazing nature and enjoying the landscape (?).
The other bridge connects two parts of the city and made life in this coty (?) more comfortable (mostly for people that have a car).
This city has a lot of cars that mostly come from Japan.
If you go to Japan or China, I recommend you to visit Vladivostok for 1-2 days!
Thank you for visiting this entry. I hope that you will open Google and search for some pictures of Vladivostok!
Have a good day!
0 votedOctober 18, 20181- Private Russian lessons in Moscow
Hello! :) I'm in Moscow and I'll be staying here for a few months. I'm looking for a private teacher, to take lessons in person, here in Moscow. I will probably take around 4 to 6 hours per week. If you think you can do it, or you know someone, please contact me via message and let me know your availability and rate. Thanks! :)
Facundo
PS: I'm aware of language institutes, but there are many reasons why private lessons better fit my current situation.
November 17, 201600 - 1. Esta semana no han jugado ninguna vez a los juegos FPS 2. Esta semana no ha salido de (su?) casa ninguna vez 3. He escapado de los terribles tuneles 4. No (te) has preparado para el examen 5. No has estudiado suficiente y por eso has desaprobado el examen 6. *Somos* estupidos porque no nos hemos preparado para el acontecimiento especial ("el acontecimiento especial" is gramatically correct but I cannot imagine someone saying that. Hoever, I can imagine people being more specific like "este especial acontecimiento") 7. El guerrero no *se* ha preparado para la batalla In general, most mistakes are "por -> para" and the reflexive verbs ;) Good luck!0 votedOctober 28, 20160
- обычный день (1) Я пишу за мой день. Я обычно встаю 7 или 8 часов. Во-первых, я умываюсь. Затем я принимаю душ и завтракаю чай или Mate. Я тоже ем печенье. Иногда работаю дома, а иногда езду на офис на метро. В полдень я обедаю с коллегами. После работу иду я за магазин, я buy еду. Дома я готовлю ужин. Затем я игру гитар, чищу зубы и иду спать.October 9, 2016130
A Hold in the Wall
Being an Italki user, you are supposed to be a self-taught enthusiast, who has realised that autodidactism is the new border in the educational area. Unlike people who learned/used to learn by themselves in the past, nowadays people have at their disposal almost infinite learning resources, most of them at the click of a button. Provided that you have an internet connection, you may do it. So, an amazing world of opportunities emerges in front of you. But, how does that work in poor places with an extremely lack of technological development? Obviously, we face with a major issue. It is a vicious circle. The larger poverty rate there is in a place, the fewer internet accesses are available (esta construcción es un poco rara, la segunda parte). That means that people who live there have poor chances to take advantage of this worthy tool, that could help them to improve their living conditions by learning all kind of useful things. Then, the only way to turn this inside it out, it is to bring the internet there, for instance by building a global net using solar planes as wifi spots, like Facebook is researching at this moment, or encouraging local children to learn the more (?) by using non-expensive device, such as a free-use computer embedded in a wall, which encourages them to want to learn the more, just out of curiosity. Probably, these children may be pioneers in their communities using a computer. In this way, the hole-in-the-wall project, led by Dr. Sugata Mitra, stands for good approach (?). Haven't you ever heard about it? Don't worry, you can easily find out all about it searching on the wikipedia, that would get you practiced your self-teaching. (esta ultima parte luego de la coma también es extraña)0 votedOctober 9, 20161
