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一些人可能认为将时间以准备制定详尽的时间计划会只会让成功过的速度步伐缓慢,减缓成功的速度， 但在成功的崎岖不平的成功之路上，让人出乎意料的障碍可能随时出现。在这样的情况下，成功和失败的差距是所出的准备。（I do not understand what you want to express here.）
最后，为了走向取得（走向未来，取得成就）成功，其态度是十分重要的。只要有通过充满自信与野心的态度，才能让自己把所有的努力放在寻求追求（寻求帮助，追求成功）成功上面。美国发明家爱迪生说：“我没有失败。我只是找到了一万种行不通的方法”。在成功之路上，在某时你必将总是会遇到失败和困难的。只有通过保持不屈不挠的乐观态度才能让自己在跌倒后重新爬起来，以后再重新再试。对于成功者而言，失败并不是负面一个糟糕的过程，而是通往成功之路的基石（跳板 is a little derogatory），他们知道失败是成功之母。总而言之, 成功像美丽一样，存在在旁观者的眼中每一个人眼中。但是，无论怎样你有什么看法，成为成功者的秘诀就是勤奋工作、做好准备和保持乐观信心的态度心态（乐观的心态，积极的态度）。
I cannot beliece you are not a native speaker ! Your word and sentence is in a very high level! Maybe you do not well on some word match but it does not matter. With time going, you will be familiar it.
0 votedMarch 20, 20160
一些人认为衡量成功的标准是财富、社会地位及名誉，而一些人则认为衡量成功唯一的标准就是个人的幸福水平。每个人对于成功均都有自己的标准。现代汉语词典中给成功的定义是 “获得预期的结果”；根据兰登书屋韦氏词典给成功的的定义成功是“实现目标”。对我而言，我认为成功就是实行现（实行法规，实现目标）了只能通过勤奋、准备（I do not understand what you want to prepare for？）和保持乐观信心态度的心态才能实行达成的目标。
首先，为了得到取得成功，勤奋和努力是必须的。孙中山曾经说过:“不断的地（不断的is adj, 不断地 is adv. 奋斗is v. ）奋斗，就是走上成功之路的钥匙”。同样，著名的英国作家托马斯·哈代简单地（maybe you want to express briefly instead of easily? So 简洁地 will be better）说:“成功要靠通过三件事才能赢得：努力、努力、再努力”。从自己的经历中，我从自己的经历中学到只有通过勤奋才能避免那些将导致失败的错误。有些人相信因为自己本人不算是天才所以将来没法取得大成功 ，但我认为在大多数的情况下，成功的一大秘诀就是不断地勤奋与努力。引用一句鲁迅的话：“这世界上哪里有天才？我只不过是把别人喝咖啡的时间都用在工作上了。”
其次，虽然勤奋和努力是取得成功的主要（大 always be used to describe size, this time, major will be better.）因素，但是如果没有计划和准备，这些努力很容易被浪费。苏轼有一名句说：“慎重则必成，轻发则多败。”换而言之意思是（换而言之is a adversative word like but, I guess there you want to continue your mean.），谨慎办事就必然将得成功，但如果轻举妄动草率行事（轻举妄动 is not mean no plan, it mean with out instruct, for example, 罪犯在警察的监视下不敢轻举妄动。），没有计划，就很容易将会(To be honest, Chinese pay less attention to tense. Not like English, we do not always use exactly word like will to describe time.)失败。0 votedMarch 20, 20160- Urban population becomes more and more Recently I realized that urban population become more and more. It is very interested for me to find answers to explain what cause this situation. Here are three conclusions I have got. Cities give more job opportunities than countryside. The young people only choose some physical works in countryside. But in cities they will become a singer, dancer, painter, teacher, director and so on if they want. High living standards of cities is very attractive to everybody. Cities have more high-level teaching team, more hi-tech medicine, more modernization security system than countrysides. In order to enjoy a high quality of life, people are willing to migrate to cities. Now, farming need few workers not like before because the development of technology. I make an asumption that five farmers worked for a field by hand ten years ago, today, a farmer with an agricultural machine is enough. So many young people do not have work to do. Urban population surge is a quite complex problem. My conclusions are just apart of it.March 19, 201610
- Medical Tests On Animals I read an article of medical tests on animals yesterday. I always feel that these tests are very cruel until I read the article. There two main advantages from it. The article said medical tests on animals improve modern medical science. Medical research cannot test in human bodies without any protection, so animals become the best choice as a succedaneum. Every medicine must be tested before product. The only best way is testing on animals. It helps a lot to improve modern medical science. Another opinion the article said about clones. Many counties ban clones, but the article thinks clones is good for medical science. If somebody has heart disease, doctors could clone a new heart. Maybe heart disease will be conquered by the way. Two reasons from it seem like reasonable, do you agree?March 17, 201630
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</font>0 votedMarch 16, 20160电视节目关于种族主义 Old TV Show about racism Pt.1
Hey, hi guys got a sec?
嗨兄弟，你现在有空吗？
Urkle go away, we don’t want to have to dunk you, again!
乌克尔，走开，不要逼我们再次将你扣入蓝篮（蓝is blue，篮is a basket ）内。
Ah, as long as you don’t bank me in…it’s fine.
啊，只要你们别投篮不中就行。 只要你们别投不中篮就行is more native.
Hey, let me show you a few moves.
嘿，给你们看看我的篮球技术 给你们展示一下我打篮球的技术is more native.
Oh, don’t mess with me, don’t mess with me (teasing, you can't outperform me)
噢，不能瞒过我，不能瞒过我 不要惹我 （嘲笑，你是不能战胜我的）
Hey, check it out man (commenting about his good basketball skills)
打得漂亮 this sentence translate very well, very native!（评论他优秀的打篮球技术）
Okay guys, showtime’s over. I have vital information to share with you.
好了朋友们，表演结束了。我有很重要的消息想和你们分享一下。
Urkle I already told you a 1000 times I refuse to take polka lessons
乌克尔，已告诉你好几遍or无数次，我不愿意上波尔卡舞课。
Believe it or not guys, this even tops polka
(信不信由你?)right，there you translate perfect，其实这个消息比波尔卡舞课还重要
We’re trying get a black history class here at school
我们想让学校开一门有关于黑人历史的课程
It’ll help us appreciate the past, thereby contributing to the present and preparing us for the future
这样会让我们感谢往事过去，为现在贡献奉献现在，同时为未来做好准备准备将来
so I’d like all your ?? (names) right here
那把所以请你们把的名字都写上来吧
sounds good to me
没问题 听上去不错
oh thanks a lot guys, well that was easy (says to himself)
非常感谢你们，‘就这么简单！’
okie doke, thanks
好滴，谢谢
ka toots (made up word) dudes, thanks!
谢谢你们的帮助
look at all the signatures I got
看看所有这些我得到的签名 (want to say signature not autograph)
oh good work, I got a bunch too
做的不错，我也得到了很得较多
I appreciate all your help
我很感谢你的帮助
Well anytime my cute little crusader
没什么，我可爱的小改革者
I believe in you and I believe in your cause
我很支持你，也支持你的目标事业or工作will be better (支持工作，实现目标)加油
Well I appreciate that Steve
谢谢你
Hey my locker’s open
我的柜子怎么开着呢？(school locker)
Oh my god.
天啊
Laura what’s wrong?
劳拉，怎么了？
“If you want black history go back to Africa”
“如果你想要学黑人历史，滚回非洲去”
What?
什么东西？
n＊gger （written on her locker)
黑鬼You do a good job, and I believe you can do better and better. Best wishes to you :)
0 votedMarch 16, 20161- How to lead advertisements to develop well? Many false unhealthy advertisements bewilder consumers todays. I find it misleads our lifestyles, and some measures should be enforced to protect consumers’ rights. My first suggestion is that every advertisement should tell consumers what kinds of harm it has. If a cold medicine will make patients feel stomachache, advertisements must inform it to patients. Instead of only to publicize the cold medicine’s advantage, such as how effective the medicine is, how taste well the medicine is, how harmful less the medicine is…… Next, advertisements should not use false informations. If a toy car only fits ten years old children, the advertisement could not write it fits all ages children. Some businessmen want to high sales volume. So they hide the age limit in advertisements. This behavior is immoral and I wish it could be banned. Finally, I advocate some unhealthy products such as cigarettes, wine, junk food and so on should not have advertisements. Unhealthy products damage our health, even we cannot ban them, not allow them appearing in advertisements to draw consumers attentions may be efficacious to protect our health. By the three ways to limit advertisements, maybe our life will become better.March 16, 201600
- How do thinks I about advertising? Today many advertising around our life. Some people like it and some people not. I will talk about what is my opinions. We must admit that advertisings have some positives. It helps modern business to develop. Without advertisings businessmen cannot introduce their produets of customers. For example, if I want to buy a mop, I could watch TV advertisings to know which one is easy using and suit me very much. Although advertisings have some negatives. The worst side is it could mislead customers. Most advertings only show advantage and hide disadvantages. Once I find a vacuum cleaner is a great choice of cleaning my house. The advertising said that the vacuum cleaner is lightweight and easy operating. It has a beautiful appearance and I like it very much. After I have bought I find it has a deadly disadvantage that it has a long electric wire. Whenever I do some cleaning, the electric wire around me all the way. The disadvantage makes me annoyed. And I never know the disadvantage before I bought it. Advertising hides it. By the two exampleS, I feel false advertising is not good for improving our lifestyle. I do not lOVE it.March 15, 201660
衣服/Clothes
她看起来有二十多岁。她个子很矮。她的头发很长，而且是黑色的。（A lot of she make the sentence look strange, maybe you can combine it into one sentence like this: 她是一个二十多岁的矮个姑娘，有着乌黑的长发。）她外面穿着一个夹克，里面是衬衣和戴一个围巾。她的夹克是黑色的，衬衣是白色的，围巾是红色的。我觉得她的夹克很美丽漂亮（漂亮的夹克，美丽的姑娘，these are right match）。我不喜欢她的围巾，因为很丑陋的。(丑陋 is too serious to describe a scarf, 丑 is enogh.)
他看起来二十多岁。他个子很高。他的头发略短，是黑色的。（他是一个二十多岁的高个男孩，有着简洁利落的黑色短发。）他穿一个夹克衫，衬衣和并且戴一个领带。他的夹克衫是棕色的，衬衣是绿色的，领带是红色的。我觉得他的夹克衫很美丽看上去很帅气（Less people use 美丽 to describe a man, 帅气 will be better. ）。我喜欢他的衬衣，因为很有意思趣。（Maybe you want to express that look funny?有趣 will be better than 有意思。The word 有趣 is more friendly and look like a write word instead of speak word.）
她看起来三十多岁。她个子很高。她的头发长，是黑色的。(Oh, I see, maybe you are practicing a sentence form? I must to say that you do a good job, there are nearly have any errors. I just change your sentences more fluent, not because you write wrong. )她穿一个连衣裙和并且戴了一个帽子，手镯和耳环。她的连衣裙是红蓝两色的，帽子是蓝色的，耳环和手镯是金色的。我觉得她的连衣裙很美丽。我不喜欢她的帽子，因为很丑陋的。
他看起来三十多岁。他的个子很矮。他的头发有点短，是黑色的。他穿着一个夹克，衬衣和裤子并且和戴一个帽子。他的夹克是黑色的，衬衣是绿色的，裤子是蓝色的，帽子是绿色的。（Also, you can conbine it into: 他穿着黑色的夹克，绿色的衬衣，蓝色的裤子并且戴着一顶黑色的帽子。）我觉得他的衬衣很丑陋的。我喜欢他的夹克，因为很酷。
谢谢！0 votedMarch 8, 20160
