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    Hi! I corrected your passage with more common phrasing  and wording in English. It was very good! I agree with your message (I am learning Spanish).


    To learn a new language, you must live it.

    From de moment that you want to learn a new language, it is necessary live it. Change your life, change the set up your cellphone to that language, watch movies with lyrics, listen specifc music, read about yours needed and become that actions in benefit yourself, always with very joy and focus.


    From the moment that you decide to learn a new language, it is necessary to start living it. You need to change your life. Change your settings on your phone to the new language. Watch movies and listen to specific music in that language. You should read about what you need  to do to learn and start doing those things that will help you learn the language. You should do this with a good attitude and determination.

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    The DuFF

    i just finished watching a movie called 'The duff.' You are kind probably gussing guessing  that it is just another Teen movie  and that it is useless .But in fact it is really intersting interesting. I think that it is an inspiration for teens . It may be the best teen movie that i have ever watched because it does not just give a picture of a life of a teenager but a  a more greater and more in depth picture of how hard teeangehood is. Adults do not realize remember how hard it is.  I want to point out is that this movie have has really shown how teens are looking look  at themselves and it gives them another view that high school life that high school is not all about popularity. It is about loving yourself and living your life the way you want to it to be, not caring about what people think of you .And i guess that is what is missing in our societies right now . i really recommend watching this movie if you are interested !


    Great post. I corrected with more common phrasing in English. Nice work!

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    May 28, 2016
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    Practicar con pasado (por favor corregrirlo) Hoy fue un dia bonito en mi cuidad. Fui al parque con me perro y mis hijos. Ellos juegeron y yo y mi perro caminamos por el parque. Despues, regrasamos en casa y teniamos un helado. Entonces, mi hijos salieron a jugar futbol. Yo tuve un poco de trabajo a hacer por me negocio. Tuve que escribir un nuevo libro por me tienda. Escirbi una libro de una playa (mis libros son para ninos). Cuando termine mi libro, concine almuerzo para mis hijos. Ellos comieron y salieron un otra vez a jugar. Tuve que ir a la tienda a comprar una regalo para mi tia. Cuando regrase, vi una pelicula con mi esposo. Fue un buen dia.
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  • Corrected

    Hi! I corrected each sentence with more common phrasing below. Good work! I am the same with learning Spanish. I am very shy when talking in person. Keep practicing. You have a good attitude!


    Try to succeed..

    Hello everybody, I don't know if someone read me but I would (have) tried.

    Hello everybody, I don't know if someone is reading this, but I wanted to try.

    In the moment, I learn english. But I don't learn english as I have could to make previously.

    I am learning English now,   (the second part doesn't make sense)

    Now, it's good. My motivation is different, why ? Because, I accept my errors and I learn differently.

    Now it is better. My motivation is different. Why? Because I accept my errors and learn differently (this sentence was very good).

    No frustration, just that I love. For me, grammar and vocabulary it's not important, because a language learn with time.

    I am not frustrated because I love it. For me, grammar and vocabulary is not important. Language is learned with time.

    It is important, of course. But now, I think that the success is possible without learn stupidly.

    It is important, of course, but now I think that success is possible without learning stupidly (we usually would not use this phrasing).

    Sometime, I "mix" words. So, I try to make short sentences.

    Sometimes, I mix words so I try to make short sentences.

    My problem is my timidity (shy), I'm afraid to talk english. But, i'm decided to change.

    My problem is that I am shy and afraid to talk in English. But I decided to change.

    I need to train. I would like to try with you.

    I need to practice. I would like to practice with you.

    Please, if you have times and if you are patient ^^ Contact me for talk on skype for example.

    Please, if you have time and if you are patient, contact me to talk on skype (for example)

    Thanks for reading me.

    Thanks for reading this.

    (This text was written in 20 min, and I search some words : previously, frustration, without, stupidly, to train)

    This text was written in 20 min, and I searched for some words:

    See you soon !

    Emmanuel, le français (never never give up)

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    Bedroom cities

    This is my first entry and I don't know what about  to write about. So I'm going to start speaking talking about myself. My name's Iván and I'm 42 , l live in Valdemoro near to Madrid. Everyday I have to go to Madrid Capital to for  my job (or to work). Living in Madrid is very expensive for me and my family Therefore I have always lived in cities near from Madrid. Lot of this cities we said it "bedroom cities" We call a lot of these cities "bedroom cities" because this cities  they developed grew up a lot in the 70's with country people looking for new opportunities in the big city.  All thats workers used this cities only to sleep and they were working the rest of the day. The workers only used these cities to sleep in because the rest of the day they  worked.In that those days the cities grew up very quicky and their population, but not the services . the cities' population grew but their services did not. However nowadays this  they  are very big and have all of the needed services like hospitals, schools, universities, sport centers, shopping malls etc. To make a long story short, I really like to live in a bedroom city


    Hi Ivan,

    Your English is good, I could understand it easily. I corrected it with more common phrasing and grammar. Nice work!

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    May 28, 2016
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  • Commented

     I am a native speaker from Texas in the USA

    If you want someone to do something with you you would say  "Do you want to do something with me?" or be specific "Do you want to get coffee?"  You don't need to really say "with me."   You would never say "join with me." If you said "join me in a game of chess" it would be fine but it would be better to say "Do you want to play chess."


    If you want to work somewhere you would say "I would like to work for your company" (you wouldn't say join the company).  Never say "join with"  in any case.

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    May 28, 2016
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  • Corrected

    Learning

    When the study of languages is between a lot of people or better said when the study of the languages is among all us and each person help to the other without an economic goal only with the hopeness of learnt to his own choosen language, there is a big force that guides us toward the victory.
    I started more than 20 years ago studing in english but today i don't have the fluenty to have an speech with an english native person even to understand him and my question is what have i been making to don't know maintence a speech without look a baby learning his first language?
    Maybe i didnt enougth wanted to learnt in english but now when i see the inportant that it has to memper a language which is used by millions of persons to comunicate us i think maybe my only fake was not to choose the correct way.


    Here's how I would correct your passage: (Native English speaker from Texas).

    When language is studied between a lot of people (or when it is with all of us), it would be best if each person helps the other without an economic gain.  The only goal would be to learn their chosen language.
    I started learning English more than 20 years ago but I still can't speak fluently with a native English speaker. What can I do to gain more fluent speech? I don't want to sound like a baby learning his first language. Maybe I haven't wanted to learn English enough. When I see how important it is to know a language that millions of people use to communicate, I think that my only mistake was that I choose the wrong way to learn.



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    May 28, 2016
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    Mi trabajo Queiro escribir de mi trabajo. Soy un terapista de linguaje y hablar. Enseno ninos como hablar. Trabajo con estudiantes que tienen retrasos en el dessarollo. Algunos de mis estudiantes no pueden hablar nada. Les enseno como comunicar con photos o con sus manos. Algunos de mis estudiantes no puedo producir sonidos en palabras correcto. Les enseno como produce los sonidos correcto. Algunos de mis estudiantes tienen problemos con aprender linguaje (pero no es un problemo con aprender un otra idiomo, es un retraso en dessarollo de linguaje nativo). Trabajo en una escuela y soy sola terapista en la escuela. Trabajo can los maestras a ayudar los estudiantes a comunicar en la clase. Si los estudiantes no tienen problemas con comunicar en la clase, no necesito ayudarlos. A veces algunos estudiantes reciben terapia en un otra oficina si no necesita terapia en escuela. Mi trabajo pasado fue en este tipo de oficina (una clinica). Me gusta la escuelo mejor que la oficicna clinica porque los horas de trabajo es mejor en la escuela. No trabajo mucho en el verano ahora y tengo mas tiempo con mi hijos. A veces extreno mi trabajo en la clinica pero mi familia en mas importante. Puede hacer mas dinero en la clinica, porque dinero no es todo! Tiempo con mi familia es mejor!
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  • Corrected
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    My friends Dulce (I am studying the adjectives )

    I am going to describe to my dog: Dulce (I will try to use a lot adjectives)

    Dulce is 9 months old. She is black and yellow and she likes to running in the park and play with other dogs.Dulce likes to eat chicken and sometimes they are living alive. :(

    When she was a puppy I thought that she will would has have a little bit of hair, but now she is a lot  very furry!! Also she is very friendly and lovely! She always seems happy! For that reason her name is Dulce.

    End.

    I will be thankful for you corrections. :)


    Cute dog!

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    May 5, 2016
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