Hi! I corrected each sentence with more common phrasing below. Good work! I am the same with learning Spanish. I am very shy when talking in person. Keep practicing. You have a good attitude!

Try to succeed..

Hello everybody, I don't know if someone read me but I would (have) tried.

Hello everybody, I don't know if someone is reading this, but I wanted to try.

In the moment, I learn english. But I don't learn english as I have could to make previously.

I am learning English now,   (the second part doesn't make sense)

Now, it's good. My motivation is different, why ? Because, I accept my errors and I learn differently.

Now it is better. My motivation is different. Why? Because I accept my errors and learn differently (this sentence was very good).

No frustration, just that I love. For me, grammar and vocabulary it's not important, because a language learn with time.

I am not frustrated because I love it. For me, grammar and vocabulary is not important. Language is learned with time.

It is important, of course. But now, I think that the success is possible without learn stupidly.

It is important, of course, but now I think that success is possible without learning stupidly (we usually would not use this phrasing).

Sometime, I "mix" words. So, I try to make short sentences.

Sometimes, I mix words so I try to make short sentences.

My problem is my timidity (shy), I'm afraid to talk english. But, i'm decided to change.

My problem is that I am shy and afraid to talk in English. But I decided to change.

I need to train. I would like to try with you.

I need to practice. I would like to practice with you.

Please, if you have times and if you are patient ^^ Contact me for talk on skype for example.

Please, if you have time and if you are patient, contact me to talk on skype (for example)

Thanks for reading me.

Thanks for reading this.

(This text was written in 20 min, and I search some words : previously, frustration, without, stupidly, to train)

This text was written in 20 min, and I searched for some words:

See you soon !

Emmanuel, le français (never never give up)

Try to succeed.

Hello everybody, I don't know if anyone can understand this, but I would like to try.

At the moment, I'm learning English. Until now I couldn't learn English very well.

Now, it's good. My motivation is different. Why ? Because, I accept the fact that I make errors and I learn differently.

No more frustration, I just love it. For me, grammar and vocabulary it's not so important, because you can learn a language learn with time.

It is important, of course. But now, I think that success is possible without learning stupidly.

Sometimes, I "mix up" words. So, I try to make short sentences.

My problem is my timidity (I'm shy), I'm afraid to talk in English. But, I decided to change.

I need to train. I would like to try with you.

Please, if you have time and if you are patient ^^ Contact me for talk on skype, for example.

Thanks for reading me.

(This text was written in 20 min, and I looked up some words : previously, frustration, without, stupidly, to train)

See you soon !

Emmanuel, le français (never never give up)