Illegal Parking in Okinawa

Okinawa is a nice place to visit. There are beautiful beaches to relax, delicious foods to enjoy and great malls to shop. However, the public transit is not so convenient, and we needed to rent a car to travel through the city.
One day, we drove the rented car to a popular tourist attraction to have lunch, and parked it on the roadside. After we enjoyed the wonderful lunch in the seaside theme cafe, we walked back to our rented car and realized there were police standing around it. They pasted a little yellow paper on the front window noting that it was illegal to park there and they gave us a ticket. We didn't notice any "no parking" signs and besides, there were cars in front and back of us, though they also had little yellow papers on them.
We went to the police station next, admitted guilt and promised not to do it again. They fined us, we took it to the bank and paid the 15,000 yen. We lost money and time.  That was a painful lesson: always park you car in the legal parking lot!

Word practice 08-16

Sea
1 I am sitting and thinking by the sea.
2 Don't drop the waste into the sea.
3 Most of the kids have never seen the sea.
Quick
1 She gave him a quick glance.
2 His attack was quick.
3 Would you like a quick drink?
Dead
1 He dropped dead last week.
2 I wouldn't be seen dead in a straw hat.
3 The fish is dead.
Village
1 I lived in a remote mountain village.
2 They set up a new middle school in the village.
3 The flood ruined the village.
Bit
1 I am a bit tried.
2 I just want a bit of chocolate.
3 I'll be home a bit late tomorrow.
Oil
1 The oil drum leaks.
2 The oil is running short.
3 This massage will feel more comfortable if I use some oil on your skin.
Slow
1 The slow animal tries to move.
2 She gave a slow smile.
3 I have been a bit slow in making up my mine.  (I don't know what this means.)
Winter
1 Our house is cold in the winter.
2 I go skiing in the winter.
3 It's winter already.
Phone
1 Look! It's my new phone.
2 I have to make a phone call.
3 Everyone has a cell phone nowadays.
Wine
1 A glass of wine before bed helps you sleep.
2 Drink this glass of wine.
3 Somebody watered down the wine.

***I noticed you use passive constructions.  I'd strongly recommend against using these.  They make you sound unsure of yourself.  Always be confident with what you say. Use active verbs.  Henry lights the fire.  The fire should not be lit by Henry.  Passive constructions are technically grammatically correct, but a waste of time and defeat the purpose of persuasive communication.  Make sense?

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My name is Jose Avendaño, I'm from Chile.
I have am twenty two years old and I don't study well am a person that has difficult to study (Including English).  Nevertheless, however I'm studying engineering computer science.

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