Report

Hi everyone !

I would like you to correct the following report I've written, Thank you in advance.

The aim of this report is to outline the issues raised in relation to the college café and make recommendations on how to these problems could be adressed. addressed

Closing times:

It opens early, which is appropriate for the students. However, a lot of them can't go because of the closing times. It closes soon early, ("soon" implies that it is a one time thing, while "early" dictates that the closing time is the same from day to day.  e.g. "I get off work early."  "I get off work soon" )therefore, many students cannot purchase a meal or drinks.

Better menu:

Some students go there every day to have a breakfast or have a snack.  (We don't use the indefinite article "a" when talking about a meal.  Snack isnt a meal so you can use "a" there.)  Although the quality is good, they feel that they are not provided with a wide range of options, especially for vegetarians.

Furniture:

There are many tables and chairs to sit down at and talk with your friends. (This sentence is a compund sentence and requires 2 prepositionals phrases. "with your friends" is one, but the other side doesnt have one.  So adding the preposition "at" makes it a prepositional phrase.)  Nevertheless However, (Nevertheless is used in place of "instead" and usually has the word "but" before it.  "But nevertheless". However is a better word to use here.)   they are very uncomfortable, basic and old. For this reason, new furniture would make the café a better and beautiful place for students to attend.

Pricing policy

There is not a wide variety of menus and those existing are very expensieve expensive. Hence, if prices could be reduced, that would atract  attract more people.

Recommendations

From all the above points, it is clear that several improvements could be made, from replacing the furniture to widening the choice of meals. If the opening hours could be extended and the prices reduced slightly, the new café would undoubtedly be more popular with students.

As a note, make sure all punctuation doesn't have a space before it.

I love salad ! = incorrect

I love salad! = correct