Part of my Personal Statement

My interest in education dates back to my years in elementary school, where I suffered unfair treatment. When I was in Grade Four, one day, a classmate framed me that I stole her shuttlecock, because we both had a green one. Shuttlecock was a kind of popular toy among girls at that time. Then we grappled with each other until other stopping us. My class teacher found out it soon, and asked us the reason for our fighting. I expected the teacher would clarify that I was not a thief. However, she told everyone, she thought that was not a big deal at all, because one shuttlecock only costed 0.5 yuan, with a puzzled expression. Since then, I determined if I become a teacher someday, I will never treat students like she did.
Every time when I met nice and professional teachers, I told myself that is what I would like to be; while, when I found a teacher did something wrong, I also told myself that is what I would not like to be.

During the last year of my college, I worked as a teacher for an internship in an educational services. I have taught young pupils and adults Chinese. My lovely students often asked me some questions about common language phenomenons but it was hard to say why. In order to be more competent for my job, I read a lot of professional books and attended lectures. Gradually I have developed a special interest in talking to them and finding their views of looking at everything. Each student can think independently no matter how old he is correct, but you can also say: "they are" to be gender neutral. Talking is the best way to practice Chinese, as well as a method to learn a person. Only communication between teacher and student can make teaching charming.

I began to learn to play erhu—— a Chinese two-stringed bowed musical instrument from nine years old. At first, I am was not a talented student and I learned step by step until the third year, when we practiced a composition named Ting song——describing a famous hero Yue fei. I'm a person who acquaints things slowly.  It is just for this reason that I believe I will do teacher’s work with the maximum patience.

K-POP

Today, I' d like to talk about K-pop singers of Korea. I am proud of them because they are very popular. I like to listen to K-pop music. I always listen to K-pop music. My favorite K-pop singer is a boy group named "BTS". They are pretty handsome. Plus, they can sing very well. There are a lot of K-pop singers in Korea.
Have you ever heard about K-pop?

Nothing wrong with the sentence I highlighted, I only highlighted it because I love BTS too. [emoji] Jungkook is my bias.

And to answer your question: Yes, I've heard of Kpop. I don't listen to it very often, but I like BTS, Bigbang, 4Minute, Twice. My friend (who is half Korean) introduced me to kpop in high school a couple of years ago.

Compare and Contrast Paragraph:

Many people think twins are similar in many character ways like looks and morals but we shouldn't pay attention to it, it's not the truth. I have uncles who are twins , they have similar faces, you could especially tell when they were children. Now, if you see them for the first time , you'd think that they don't have any differences but if you look closely , you can find differences in their looks, also they are different morally. Ben is very calm and he always tries to solve his problems by speaking while Shun is rash and hot tempered. He always quarrels and bosses people around . They also are different in their favorite foods and games. In spite of being twins, their only similarity are their differences. Please correct my mistakes in this paragraph.

A visit

A few days ago , I visited my best friend who I have not seen her for three years . We were keeping contact but not saw haven't seen each other in the past three years . I thought we were still best friends according to our messages and calls , but it was weird when I saw her . I could not control my face to stop or you can say "stop my face from"  smile smiling when I saw her. I were was not sure if it was excitement that made me behave so …terrible . I did not say much ,actually she was leading the talk  or you can say "conversation". It seemed that there were so many things I wanted to tell her but I lost the ability to speak . We were a bit different and I were was not so adapted to it (＞﹏＜)

Introducing myself

Hi everyone,my name is Cai Hong and it's mean 'Rainbow' in English.I'm a student from Malaysia.I realize that English is important as it's become the lingua franca nowadays.My english isn't very good and I hope i can improve my English through italki.Is there any helpful suggestion that can help me to improve my English?Thanks a lot :)

You're English is pretty good here, there's nothing to correct.

Cool name by the way.

Help me !

What does "" Hate-in"" mean??
Help me please .

By itself "hate-in" makes no sense.