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    Hope<font style="background-color: yellow;">fully</font> a good start

    It has been a while since I wrote something last time. Okay as it is a notebook entry,  I hope I could make a <font style="background-color: yellow;">good :)</font> start and keep things working well.
    I just came back to work from <font style="background-color: yellow;">the</font> Chinese New Year holiday. It was a tir<font style="background-color: yellow;">ing</font> but sweet holiday to me, as we did have to clean the house, prepare the food, <font style="background-color: yellow;">and </font>meet a lot relatives and friends. Too <strike>many house works</strike>  <font style="background-color: yellow;">too much <font style="background-color: yellow;">housekeeping</font><font style="background-color: yellow;"> </font></font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">will</font> destroy a good holiday mood.:-P
    But I still had a lot of happy time<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">s</font> with my family and friends. I could feel <strike>that</strike> my mum's pleasure  which is quite important to her health<strike>y</strike> and I wish she could be happy <strike>for the</strike> most of the time. Some of my old friends also came and chatted with me. We talked for a long long time although we don't contact each other all the time (or <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">too often)</font>... <strike>Or</strike> <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">Perhaps </font>maybe that's the reason we could have the long talk?

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    Good job!  But instead of " I could feel my mum's pleasure..." I think it would be better to say  <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">"I could tell my mum was happy..."</font>

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    February 20, 2016
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    Social media

    Social media has been <font style="background-color: yellow;">of</font> growing <strike>in</strike> importance in the (latest / <font style="background-color: yellow;"> last</font>) five years. Nowadays, most of the population has an account <strike>in </strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">on at least</font> one <strike>of the</strike> social media <font style="background-color: yellow;">site</font> <strike>at least</strike>, in which <font style="background-color: yellow;">they</font> share personal information about music, work, feelings, etc.
    <strike>That</strike>  <font style="background-color: yellow;">It</font> is useful for be<font style="background-color: yellow;">ing</font> in touch with <strike>the</strike> breaking news, but <strike>that</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">it </font>can have a negative side too. In this point, what do you think <strike>is </strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">of</font> somebody <font style="background-color: yellow;">who would </font>share a picture of you without ask<font style="background-color: yellow;">ing</font> for permission <strike>in </strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">on</font> the internet? Would you be upset or <font style="background-color: yellow;">would</font> it <strike>doesn't </strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">not </font>matter to you? I think that we should be careful, <font style="background-color: yellow;">e</font>specially when we are going to share or talk about something that can affect other people. 

     

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    February 20, 2016
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    我的介绍! 你好, 朋友们! 这是我的第一个日记。 我的中文名字是季娃娜。 我学中文学四年了在中学, 可是有几乎两年我不学习很多。 现在我是大学第二年的学生。 我住在佛罗里达。 我是巴西人和美国人。 我出生在巴西, 可是我在美国长大。 我十九岁。我会说英语,葡萄牙文, 还有一点中文。我最近也开始学日本语和韩国语, 不过我 日本语比韩国语知道更多。 我爱学语言!一天我去这些都的国家。 请帮我提高我的中文平, 请教我新词汇我会用在这些小文章。 我也会帮你学英语,也 给你提高英语的方法!
    February 18, 2016
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