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Hope a good start It has been a while since I wrote something last time. Okay as it is a notebook entry, hope I could make a Google start and keep things working well. I just came back to work from Chinese New Year holiday. It was a tired but sweet holiday to me as we did have to clean the house, prepare the food, meet a lot relatives and friends. Too many house works will destroy a good holiday mood.:-P But I still had a lot of happy time with my family and friends. I could feel that my mum's pleasure which is quite important to her healthy and I wish she could be happy for the most of time. Some of my old friends also came and chatted with me. We talked for a long long time although we don't contact each other all the time... Or maybe that's the reason we could have the long talk?

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Hopefully a good start

It has been a while since I wrote something last time. Okay as it is a notebook entry,  I hope I could make a good :) start and keep things working well.
I just came back to work from the Chinese New Year holiday. It was a tiring but sweet holiday to me, as we did have to clean the house, prepare the food, and meet a lot relatives and friends. Too many house works  too much housekeeping will destroy a good holiday mood.:-P
But I still had a lot of happy times with my family and friends. I could feel that my mum's pleasure  which is quite important to her healthy and I wish she could be happy for the most of the time. Some of my old friends also came and chatted with me. We talked for a long long time although we don't contact each other all the time (or too often)... Or Perhaps maybe that's the reason we could have the long talk?

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Good job!  But instead of " I could feel my mum's pleasure..." I think it would be better to say  "I could tell my mum was happy..."

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Hope a good start

It has been a while since I wrote something last time. Okay as it is a notebook entry, hope I could make a Google start and keep things working well.
I just came back to work from Chinese New Year holiday. It was a tired but sweet holiday to me as we did have to clean the house, prepare the food, met a lot of relatives and friends. Too many house works will destroy a good holiday mood.:-P
But I still had a lot of happy time with my family and friends. I could feel that my mum's pleasure which is quite important to her healthy and I wish she could be happy for the most of time. Some of my old friends also came and chatted with me. We talked for a long long time although we don't contact each other all the time... Or maybe that's the reason we could have the long talk?
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'a good start' instead of 'a Google start'... One mistake already.

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