Nganuman ganahan ko matuto ug bisaya

Ganahan ko matuto ug bisaya kay bisaya ang akong bana. Mupatoro ko sa iya pero mutagalog pa rin siya bisan nag bisaya na ko. Dili siya sanay mag istorya ug bisaya pag ako ang iyahang ka istorya.

Mulipat na mi sa Dumaguete next week and ganahan na ko mu straight straight ug bisaya. XD

Nganuman ganahan ko magtuon ug bisaya

Ganahan ko magtuon ug bisaya kay bisaya ang akong bana. Mopatudlo ko sa iya pero mutagalog pa gihapon siya bisan nag bisaya na ko. Dili siya anad mag istorya ug bisaya pag ako ang iyahang ka istorya.

Mobalhin na mi sa Dumaguete sa sunod nga simana unya gusto na ko mu straight straight (maybe use the phrase "mulisto sa Bisaya") ug bisaya. XD

Diary entry #2 Normal day

Karon niadti niadto ko sa akong escuela. Naa koy liog sakit kay gahi unlan akong. Nisulti akong amiga, sa biyernes naa siyay ang Christmas Party. Nagkugang kaayo ako! Mobaylo kita mga hinatag.

Today, I went to my school. I have a sore neck because my pillow is hard. My friend said on friday she is going to have a christmas party. I'm very excited. We will (are going to) exchange gifts

Karon, niadto ko sa akong eskwela.  Naa koy sakit sa liog kay gahi ang akong unlan.  Nisulti akong amiga, sa Biyernes naa siyay Christmas Party.  Nagkugang kaayo ko!  Mobaylo kami ug mga hinatag.

Back on track

Back in [or 'during'] my adolescence, my family experienced a stubborn teenager who disobeyed every single teaching that would prevent him from going astray. For most young people, this transition period might be the golden opportunity to quickly wake up to from their error. I forwent the only chance to take the high school entrance examination, which is called ’Zhong Kao’ in Chinese, without any notification. My desperate father ultimately acquiesced in my ridiculous decision. I jumped for delight; I hailed my success. I soon realized my idle lifestyle gave me nothing but depression. My mother decided to send me to a vocational school for hairstyle cramming. It was not too long before I had worked as a hairdresser’s assistant. I endured scolds and complaints from the shop manager and customers. The longing for getting back to school contradicted the freedom from the deep depth of my heart. [or, "...freedom from within my heart."] As I repented Despairing that my rebellion might be detrimental to my lifelong career path, I determined to continue my education. Ever since that time when Every time I made such decisions, I have always considered the possibility of them leading me to the a disastrous road.

Description of my house

I live in an apartment with my family. We moved into it about 10 years ago. There are four people in my family: my parents, me and my younger brother.

It's a mid-size apartment complex. It's surrounded by small mountains, so we enjoy fresh air all the time.

My house  looks like a  is rectangular (in shape). I guess it's like  about 100 square meters. The room that I share with my brother is next to the door; the kitchen and living room are  in the middle of rooms  surrounded by the bedrooms, and the other rooms facing face each other. And there There are balconies at the front and the  back. We  back; we have plants there.

I think it's a perfect size for us -- not too big and not too small. I like my house, but we are moving out next month. I will miss my place.

Correct me plz

This is my writing homework for English class.
tell me if there's something wrong with grammar or the use of articles.

<telling friend="" the="" way="" to="" come="" my="" house="">

First, take the elevator and come  go down to the 1st floor. Then go to the building B, which is right next to building C. Pass through building B, and you will see [some] the wooden stairs. Go straight up to the stairs, and at the end of the stairs, you will see Songwon Atelier. Make a left and go down the street until you see Hansol Mart. Make a right and go straight up to e편한 apartment. You’ll see the building 104 at on the right. You have to pass through the underground parking lot to take an elevator.</telling>