thans for correctong Be a creator As the saying goes "Never go out there to see what happens, Go out there to make something happen",it means thet we shoudn't just wait to see what other people do and we should creat our own things. It makes me think about MaYun,the richest man in China. When he visited America,shopping online caught his eyes, which was not popular in China at that time. But he didn't just have a look, he made his decision to set his shopping website in China. After years' work, he has made it, being the leader of a company called "Alibaba". What do you think? If you are facing something you didn't hear before, what will you do? Join the fun or take advantage of it and then achieve your dream? It is the heart that matters, because every thing is depending on your heart. Don't hesitate to create a world that you have not experienced before!

Thanks for correcting There is a question which is about the standards of one's achievement.My answer is that only you help others very much,can you be a successful man. It doesn't matter if you are poor or rich,but the love heart matters.If you have lots of money but don't help the poor,people won't regard you as a successful man.I have heared an experience that a poor man donated all his money to build a road in his countryside which helps villagers can go outside more easily.In my opinion,he is richer than every rich. So let's help each other as often as possiable.Let's realize our own value!

Exercise:want to correct THANKS As the saying goes:Learning is a daily experience and a lifetime mission.We've been leraning since we are born.When you were a baby,it was enough to have the ability to look after yourself.As time goes by,you are demanded to learn more thngs like math,geography and so on.There are some people to teach you how to do and to correct you when you make mistakes. But if you are old enough to feed yourself,there are no people wathching at you any more.The most important thing is to learn every thing by yourself.How to get along well with each other may be the most difficult one.No one can give you a right answer like teachers. So please keeo modest forever, every thing can be your teacher.

Conclusion There are only about 10 days left to the end of my Chinese New Year holiday.I've been studying in my college for half a year,now I want to write a conclusion. When I saw my collge for the first time , I tought "It's much smaller than I saw on the Internet".But as I can't change the reality, the only thing I can do is to adapt it. I made many friends and learned to drink beer. It is crazy to drink Alcoholic beverages in high school. But to be honest ,beer is badder to drink than coke. In the future ,I want to be a graduate student.Although now my ability is hard to pass the examination,Iwill try my best !I don't want to waste my time like what I did last system any more.