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高山市是世外桃源。
我住在高山市十五年了，从来没有见过蟑螂。我的中文老师说高山市好像就像一个世外桃源。偶然桃是高山市的名产。高山市的名产是偶然桃。这里有很多桃树。我还也没有见过流浪狗。在日本有很多流浪狗被捉住杀死处理掉按照法律。按照日本法律，流浪狗会被捉住，然后被杀死。所以，对狗来说，日本不是世外桃源。解释原因：
1.添加的“从来”表示“一直以来”，跟前面的“我住在高山市五十年了”在意思上顺承。
2.调换位置：“偶然桃是高山市的名产”，因为整个小作文主题是高山市，所以把“高山市的名产“放在前面。
3.添加的“所以”表示某一件事情发生后带来的后果。“所以”前后的句子有因果关系。
0 votedJuly 7, 20170#1 “在我看来，选择你想去哪个地方旅行的事那么复杂”应该改成“在我看来，选择旅行地点很复杂”。”选择…的事“这样的表达比较少（一般是英语从句的说法），这个分句的主语用”你“的话会有点突兀。
#2”说起很容易，开始选择的时候就明白这件事……“应该改成”说起来很容易，但当你开始选择的时候，你就会明白，这件事……“这句话有转折的意思，并且，应该加上标点。
#3”终于我开始跟他们一起表演“应该改成”后来，我终于可以跟他们一起表演了“。添加”后来“使句子过渡自然；这里用”开始“是直接从母语翻译过来的吗？
#4“我许久梦想参观弘大”应该改成“我想参观弘大很久了”。时间补语放在句子后面。
#5”尽管我们还没决定好他们不得不同意我的意见“应该改成”尽管我们还没最终决定去哪里，但是他们可能会同意去韩国“。"尽管“”不得不“表示不情愿做但是一定要做，带有贬义。
#6”去年我跟妈妈一起去了克里米亚的城市旅游。这个城市叫叶夫帕托里亚“可以合并成一句话：“去年我跟妈妈一起去了克里米亚的叶夫帕托里亚旅游”
#7新段落要空出两个汉字的位置；注意标点符号的用法。
#8文章的篇章结构很不错，过渡也比较好，再多留意一些细节就更好了。
0 votedMarch 1, 20170A first, the main goal of learning English is to pass the tests.
But this has changed since i really put my heart into it. It seems like all of a sudden, i manage to touch the happiness of learning English.
Then the desire of learning many differernt languages just becomes stronger and stronger.
Not for the test anymore, just for the craving of get close to different way of expression and the culture obtained.
0 votedOctober 11, 20160- I mostly spend my time on watching American series,so American accent seems more familiar to me.And I think it pronounce in a more,uh,I don't know how to express properly,but to me it goes like, speaking American English makes the speaker feel more energetic and speaking British English is like the speaker have to speak in a decant way,just like a gentleman or lad,which I also like.And,since I have been learning British English in school for a long time,so it's hard for me to change.Without carefully notice,the different pronunciation between this two can be easily ignored. In all,although I'm now speaking British English,both American English and British English are acceptable for me.But sometimes I am confused about the English I speak is whether the British English or the American English.0 votedFebruary 12, 20160
- I mostly spend my time on watching American series,so American accent seems more familiar to me.And I think it pronounce in a more,uh,I don't know how to express properly,but to me it goes like, speaking American English makes the speaker feel more energetic and speaking British English is like the speaker have to speak in a decant way,just like a gentleman or lad,which I also like.And,since I have been learning British English in school for a long time,so it's hard for me to change.Without carefully notice,the different pronunciation between this two can be easily ignored. In all,although I'm now speaking British English,both American English and British English are acceptable for me.But sometimes I am confused about the English I speak is whether the British English or the American English.0 votedFebruary 12, 20160
- I mostly spend my time on watching American series,so American accent seems more familiar to me.And I think it pronounce in a more,uh,I don't know how to express properly,but to me it goes like, speaking American English makes the speaker feel more energetic and speaking British English is like the speaker have to speak in a decant way,just like a gentleman or lad,which I also like.And,since I have been learning British English in school for a long time,so it's hard for me to change.Without carefully notice,the different pronunciation between this two can be easily ignored. In all,although I'm now speaking British English,both American English and British English are acceptable for me.But sometimes I am confused about the English I speak is whether the British English or the American English.0 votedFebruary 12, 20160
