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After the third debate, the world froze. Everybody is waiting for the culmination of this breathtaking race. Who will win the title of "strongest leader"? However, a lot of people just don’t want to the polls and want to ignore the election.Today's leadership requires the best personality traits, such us being trustworthy, analytical, and well balanced.
Trustworthiness is one of the most important qualities of the whole of mankind ever. Some days ago one of the world leaders – the King of Thailand passed away. The people of his country are crying even now. This man did a lot of good things for his nation. The country trusted and was thankful for him all of his days in government. The current leaders should be trustworthy and every step of their work, action, and performance must be clear and understandable.
Next, analytical thinking is a crucial quality of personality for these days. There are plenty of tasks in which the leader has to solve every day. Furthermore, this type of personality directly connects with logical type thinking and leads to the ability to quickly find an effective and optimal solution in any given situations. By the way, There is actually an interesting fact that logical and analytical thinking are saved to a ripe old age, until such time when the brain is atrophied and loses the capacity for rational study of the world.
Finally, I gonna (gonna is too casual for an essay) will talk about one more pivotal quality such as the well-balanced quality of personality. The great best example of world leaders who successfully presented this quality such as main one is Indira Gandhi. This great woman could make do incredible things with the help of her harmonious approaches towards the government in India. It is really important to save stay calm of feelings and dignified in front common people and in front of other countries at any given time.0 votedOctober 31, 20162Words in (and) are my comments
During my summer vacations, I did two internships at the Creatop web design company and I’ve attended an mobile application development course to learn how to program.
With experiences I mentioned above, I am capable of developing mobile applications to solve problems that people may face in their daily lives, and make it more user-friendly by making use of my knowledge on website design and user interface design.
I currently have two apps available on Google Play. And (You aren't really supposed to start a sentence with and, it is only used casually) I am now developing an app which can recommend delicious food to people considering their taste and preferences.
Besides that, (just using besides to start a sentence is a little too casual) I have plenty of experiences in leading the teams. I know how to organize the whole team and make it run. I am a "doer" (I don't really suggest using this phrase as it is also casual English. Maybe say "go-getter" instead of doer as "go-getter" is often used in interviews) as well. When I set up my goals, I can always find ways to achieve it. I hope I can be of significance to your company. By helping other people with my expertise, I enjoy in their compliments. (I do not know what you are trying to say with that sentence but it doesn't really make sense in the second half)In conclusion, with the experience I have and my personalities qualifications noticed, I believe I am an appropriate candidate for this position.
Some of the corrections I made were grammatical but I have to look at resumes and applications so I made some corrections based on what I'd think would be good to hear.
0 votedOctober 31, 20161Experiences
I would like to join a team with talented players and build an outstanding product.
As I served as a military police officer in R.O.C Army Force. I also used to be a receptionist and translator, receiving the guests from Australia and introducing them to our MP203 Command.0 votedOctober 31, 20160- Plural to Singular Hallo, What are the singular phrases of these words? The word I think die Schulen die Schule die Schüler die Schüler die Fernseher der Fernseher die Lehrerinnen die Lehrerin die Männer der Mann die Lehrer der Leherer die Freunde die Freund die Radios die Radio die Kinder das Kind die Frauen die FrauOctober 7, 201630
- If you say "Drawn in Earth" it is drawn in the planet. If you want to say "on Earth", saying instead "on the face of the Earth" would be more detailed and make more sense. Using "Drawn using Earth" wouldn't make any sense, the better option is "with Earth" if you wanted to be poetic, but even then you will need to add an adjective, for example, "Drawn with the essence of Earth. The problem with that is it doesn't have a lot of adjectives in which it would make sense.0 votedOctober 7, 20160
- Corrections I have some answers to my questions and I want to make sure they are correct. The correct "ihr" command form of "schlafen" : Schlaft The correct "du" of "laufen" : Lauf Welcher Satz ist richtig?: Ich mochte wissen, wie viel der Flug kostet. " ": Ich weiß nicht, ob seine Hausaufgaben er gemacht hat. " ": Sag mir wo die Lebensmittel jetzt alle sind. " ": Er mochte wissen, ob wir kommen morgen nach Hause. " " : Weißt du, wann der Zug fährt ab. Wir sind nicht Fahrrad gefahren. Es so hat stark geregnet (als).: WIr sind nicht Fahrrad gefahren, als so stark hat geregnet es. I am confused on these Ich bin froh. Ich seid gesund. (wenn) Ich denke. Deutsch ist schwer. (dass) Er darf nicht kommen. Er muss lernen. (weil) Peter sagt. Er kommt heute um 10 Uhr. (dass) Also if I'm to say I have nothing do I say kein or nichts?June 8, 201610
- Past Tense I need to write this in past tense and I was told this was wrong. Die Fahrt mit dem Flugzeug war sehr ruhig. Sobald wir ankamen, waren wir in einem Zimmer, das wir bilden Airbnb vermietet. Wir haben die meisten der Urlaub in einem nahe gelegenen Park. Um dorthin zu gelangen wir mieteten Fahrräder und fuhren auf einem Wanderweg. Die meisten Zeiten obwohl fuhren wir die bus. Es gab nicht viele große Einkaufszentren durch das Haus. So wenn wir einkaufen gingen, haben wir eine Menge. Würden Es gibt Zeiten, in denen wir den Überblick verloren, wie lange wir dort gewesen war. Danach bei 5 Uhr aßen wir immer aus. Ich würde immer Frühstück zum Abendessen bekommen. Manchmal würden wir ins Kino gehen. Die meiste Zeit gingen wir Reiten. Es gelang uns nicht, aber wir haben versucht, für die Mathematik in der Klasse zu studieren. Wir müssen bald wieder in die Schule gehen würde. Aber wir wollten für jeden Test bereit zu sein. Am Ende der Reise hatten wir gute Freunde mit unseren Gastgebern werden. Wir mussten nicht einmal zurück zum Flughafen mit dem Bus. Wir waren enttäuscht, als wir abreisen mussten. Einmal waren wir auf der Ebene, obwohl wir froh waren, nach Hause zu gehen werden. Nachdenken über es jetzt aber, ich glaube, ich einige Dinge verlassen.June 3, 201640
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</font> It is <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"><strike>so</strike></font> emotional for me when I change him. It looks so alien <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"><strike>for</strike></font> <font style="background-color: rgb(0, 255, 255);">to </font>me.
On the whole, he is a quiet boy. He tends <font style="background-color: rgb(0, 255, 255);">to</font> get agitated when I bathe him. He cries very seldom and like<font style="background-color: rgb(0, 255, 255);">s</font> to be held in my arms.</font>0 votedJune 2, 20160I was wondering if you <font style="background-color: yellow;">could</font> share<font style="background-color: rgb(0, 255, 255);"><strike>d</strike></font> your favorite one.
My latest <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 239, 198);">hit (what are you trying to say) </font>
I used <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">a</font> food processor :p
③Wrap<font style="background-color: rgb(0, 255, 255);"><strike>ping</strike></font> the loaf in wrapping film and <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">let rest</font> in the room for an hour.
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After<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">,</font> drain <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">the</font> water off the boiled noodles, put it into bowl. Add raw egg <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">and</font> soy sauce.0 votedJune 2, 20160
