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Let It Go
I am a loser again. For a very long time I have been obsessed with a love which I created myself. It is unrequited. There is a misunderstanding between us. He doesn't love me anymore. I screwed up everything. I am a stupid. I have no strength to fight with it. I am just waiting at the centre(center) of everything without doing anything. I am just waiting (for) the storm to ease. I forgot how long I have been there. Weather is changing, days are passing but I am still standing there.
Amy T.This is very well written with only minor mistakes. Even with the mistakes you meaning was clear and understandable. Keep up the good writing and toward this issues....随它吧!!
0 votedFebruary 8, 20161The winter vacation(The Winter Vacation. We capitalize every major word in a title).
I'm going to school seven days later(are you saying that you will return to school in seven days, go to school for the first time in seven days, or that you went back to school seven days ago? ).This winter vacation is long and I have a lot of homework. I hope I have learned something from the homework.
I am happy that I got some new books, they are really good and I have started to read them.(re-order this to say "I have started to read them and they are really good." to say they are really good before you have stated that you have started to read them seems like you are just guessing.)
Winter is coming to an end, can spring be far behind?Make sure to use as space after every punctuation mark. Commas and full stops remind us to take a break when we are reading this.
Other than the first sentence being ambiguous the rest of your article made very good sense and was easy to understand 加油!!
0 votedFebruary 8, 20161I made chicken curry today
Today I made chicken curry for my family. I chopped potatoes, carrots, onions and also chicken into small blocks cubes and fried them, (use a period here) inIn the end, I put all the ingredients materials into a pot and boiled them for around 20 minutes before I added put in a lot of Japanese curry flavor curry into the pot. At In the mean time, I boiled rice as well. So when the chicken curry was ready, the rice was also ready. Everyone in my family likes to eat my chicken curry, and I feel am happy to cook for them too.
0 votedFebruary 5, 20161Spring Begins
Today I finished my horrific car training. When it's it was over, I felt relaxed. I have to admit when I do bad at something, and I want to ignore or evade them it. I know this is not good. but I really like instructors who are gentle. These days, I am stressed out, but I suppress my grumbles on purpose because I don't want to be a negative girl.
In the lunar calendar, today is the day "Spring begins" day. It sounds beautiful and romantic, I believe the next spring would will be better. Wishing you a good day.
Thank you for correcting and reading!!0 votedFebruary 4, 20160
