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The winter vacation. I'm going to school seven days later.This winter vacation is long and I have a lot of homework.I hope I have learned something from the homework. I am happy that I got some new books,they are really good and I have started to read them. Winter is coming to an end,can spring be far behind?

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The Winter Vacation.

I'm going back to school in seven days.This winter vacation is long and I have a lot of homework. I hope I have learned something from the homework.(it)
I am happy that I got some new books******.  I have started to read them and they are really good.
Winter is coming to an end. Can spring be far behind?



********You have new books....did you buy them or get them from the library?

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The winter vacation. CAPS

I'm going to school in seven days. This winter vacation is long and I have a lot of homework. I hope I have learned something from (the homework=it).
I am happy that I got some new books. They are really good and I have started to read them.
Winter is coming to an end. Can spring be far behind?
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The winter vacation（The Winter Vacation.  We capitalize every major word in a title).

I'm going to school seven days later(are you saying that you will return to school in seven days, go to school for the first time in seven days, or that you went back to school seven days ago? ).This winter vacation is long and I have a lot of homework. I hope I have learned something from the homework.
I am happy that I got some new books, they are really good and I have started to read them.(re-order this to say "I have started to read them and they are really good." to say they are really good before you have stated that you have started to read them seems like you are just guessing.)
Winter is coming to an end, can spring be far behind?

Make sure to use as space after every punctuation mark. Commas and full stops remind us to take a break when we are reading this.

Other than the first sentence being ambiguous the rest of your article made very good sense and was easy to understand 加油！！

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