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Hi/Bonjour, I'm a college student who is learning chemistry at grade three . Language learning is one of my greatest passions . I'm self-teaching French with the help of Duolingo rigth now , and my English can be considered as my strength . I'm here basically seeking for help on French and also willing to offer suggestions about Chinese :)
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    February 5, 2016
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    去年的臺灣旅行

    去年我去了台灣旅行. 我的原因去台灣是我打算研
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    February 3, 2016
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    科隆跨年夜的大规模性的侵案

    2015的跨年夜在德国的科隆发生了大规模的性侵案。这件事不仅震动（震惊）了德国人民，也令全欧洲人民对德国总理默科尔（的）难民政策加剧担忧（担忧加剧）。那天晚上，上几百位（百名）德国女士（妇女）被北非和中东男子骚扰和抢劫， 甚至有几位被强奸了。这件事已经够糟糕了，不过真的让德国老百姓吃惊的是自己官方的反应。

    2016年一月一日（you have to unify the writing of numbers , either in arabic or chinese way )，科隆的警方报到(报道）了（称）昨日的跨年庆祝会过得很顺利，称“气氛轻松，庆祝活动平和”。德国媒体也没出（给出）任何关于当天的犯罪行为的报道。反而，这件事在社交媒体发酵了几天后就终于被曝光了。原来德国的官方和媒体早就知道这件事情了，不过因为他们接到了不允许报道任何难民参与犯罪案件的指令，他们就粉饰太平了。但是随着网络曝光后，他们不得不承认事情的存在，而（并且）忍痛地承认大部分的嫌疑人是新来的难民。

    接下来，事情的细节慢慢地被透露（就被慢慢透露）了。被警察面对（询问）的时候，一位难民很得瑟（得意）地说“我是叙利亚人。你们要善待我，因为我是你们总理默克尔请来的。” 有些难民的胆子真大，公然地在警察面前把德国政府给他们的身份证给撕破了，说“明天可以再办一件。” 夏天时（有）那么多的（德）国人在火车站热烈地欢迎寻求庇护的叙利亚难民。他们怎么那么 忘恩负义呢？

    如果你想理解（为何）德国政界和媒体领导人为何会如此图（试图）掩盖事实真相，你就必须分析德国的国情和历史背景。自二战以来，德国，因为（对于)在此战中做的坏事，一直感到特别过意不去。虽然现在的德国人跟那个时代的犯罪(二战）没关系，但是他们还是难脱离羞耻感。因此去年的难民危机爆发时，不少德国领导人好像把它当作一个改邪归正的机会。通过大方地救助逃离战争和迫害的人，德国可以表达自己的仁慈，让全世界向（对）他们刮目相看。虽然当时很多德国人对默克尔的“来多少就接受多少”的政策感到担忧，但是因为他们怕被控诉是个种族主义者，甚至被称为是个纳粹，他们就不敢提出意见。媒体也不敢报告任何关于难民的负面消息。警察面对前所未有的大规模性侵犯罪也不敢逮捕嫌疑人，反而袖手旁观了（不闻不问）。

    尽管很（本意是）善良（的），但默尔克的难民政策却是太天真了。邀请一大批即保守又信教（既信教又保守 , it has a logical sequence)的穆斯林男子进入德国类似的(这种)即(既)开放又（信奉）无神论的国家，能不发生文化冲突吗？结果可想而知。90年代刚刚统一的德国把东德与西德同胞融合起来已经够难（甚至还没完成）。我恐怕融合上百万北非和中东人（更）是难上加难。It's really unbelievable that an English speaker could write like this .

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    February 2, 2016
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    "False friends " between English and French False friends means words that are spelled similarly in two languages but have different meanings . In order not to make funny mistakes , do you have any to propose between English and French ? eg. journal 
    January 31, 2016
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    The French grammar Ceci , cette , ce , cela , ca , ces ......how to tell them apart ? They're so confusing > <
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    今天晚上／我今天累极了

    今天晚上

    几天前，我的一个女性朋友请我和她一起参加一场舞会。因为这是我第一次跟着女生一起参加这样的活动，所以我现在比较紧张。很可能（虽然）今天晚上的活动很好玩，还有跟这个女孩（在一起）的时候都非常好玩，不过，我还有点紧张。
    我已经十八岁了，但是以前只有了（有过）一个女朋友。因此，我觉得这样的机会非常重要。
    可惜的是，我只有（还有）六个月就（就要）出国了，时间特别紧。出国之后，至少六个月不能回国，下次回国之后，我马上又（又要）出国了。这几年我非常忙啊。
    不过因此（尽管如此），我还（还是）觉得今天晚上的那次机会很好。

    我今天累死了，好像写不出来（什么东西）。不过，我每天都要写一下（写作练习一下）。

    谢谢大家！

    lol  your learning spirit is worthy of  praises , still writing compositions when stressed out :) pretty good Chinese btw 

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    January 31, 2016
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    Hello there Please can you please change this writing into PErfect English Perfect Comhrension and gramma

    My vacation

    On our way to Prague, we rode(took) the local bus at Stone Street which is about 100 metres away from our home. Our first destination was the shopping center opposite of (to)Tornby. From there we jumped on another bus on our way to Malmö. The entire way there, I was excited. Thinking about what was to come on my journey filled me with joy and determination. Our first destination with this bus was to Ödeshög , near a Burger King, where I enjoyed a hamburger and some fries. The second was at Ljunby, where I bought a bun, (a)cake and a Coke. We arrived at the Hotel Comfort in Malmo at 18:30. It felt good to check in on the first day of our journey. Afterwards We ate(had) some Chinese food, schnitzel, and Coke at Central Station that night before going to bed.
The next morning I woke up around 6:30 for breakfast. There was plenty to choose from, so I chose yogurt, sandwiches, bacon, and cake; then I drank some orange juice. e departed around 7:20am where a bus picked us up and we went to a central bus station in another town that was close to this one. From there we took the bus to Prague made stop in berlin. The traveling began by going over the[ the Öresund Bridge (which is approximately 15.9 kilometres long) to Denmark. From there, we took the ferry to southern Gedzer.



    At around 11:20 we left Gedzer and took another ferry, this time to Rostock. Inside, there was a buffet where I ate shrimp and fish, drank Coke, and had some delicious cake for dessert. We arrived around 1:20pm, my family and I took time to appreciate the warmer weather before we proceeded to our next rest stop. Arriving (arrived)in Berlin, we checked into to a fairly large, but quiet hotel. Afterwards, we went into town, ate gulashsopa for dinner, and bought Legos and shirts for my nephews. Even though the weather was cloudy, we still enjoyed ourselves.
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    January 31, 2016
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