- Salsa Ayer, Yo fui a clase de Salsa. Me encanta Salsa. Me gusta bailar a ritmo. Me siento la música y mi cuerpo preparar bailar. el baile es muy sexy.Especialmente cuando tienes un compañero.Me encanta a música. Es muy bonita. Me gusta artistas como Celia Cruz, Andy Montanez y La india No puedo esperar a ir otra vez.March 30, 201630
Hi! Chris,I am so glad too for your letter and thank you for you r invitation to spend the next weekend with you. You made sure I will go there.
In your letter you told me there will be a Festival Science and the program me . Your words were great and would have to chosen
between the two activities. o I Let me tell you, I would prefer to go the performance called ''Can animals speak?" I have always been
interested in those sort of thing, plus I love the animals. I would like for you to send me the program please . I would love to see it. If we felt like to go to other show.
Finally, I' m sorry, but I couldn't stay with you for any longer, as you know , my mother has Alzheimer's ,and I have to visit her.Anyway ,this weekend will be fun.See you soon!
Best wishes,(YOUR NAME)
0 votedMarch 30, 20161Exercise
Exercise has a lot of benefits . Doing exercise is the most desirable thing for me. I think civilized nations are interested in it. In order to work better, look well,and strengthen your bones , you need to do exercise.The first benefit of working out it make you feel better . It keeps you active If you are a pupil , man ,woman, old, or young .whatever your age, it makes you active. It helps your mind ,body and soul produce energy and thinking well and that why you should exercise.
what do you think about it??It's really not bad but some words are not needed for this paragraph.
WE DONT USE
"PUPIL"
"LOOK WELL"
"THINKING WELL"
You were also dragging sentence with the same word.
It keeps you active If you are a pupil , man ,woman, old, or young .whatever your age, it makes you active.
Do not have to repeat the same words in the same sentence.
End your paragraph with the introduction of the paragraph.
INTRO:
Exercise has a lot of benefits
ENDING:
And that why you should exercise
OR
And that why exercising have a lot of benefits.
0 votedMarch 16, 20162- Cozumel,Mexico Yo fui a viajar Cozumel ,Mexico. Me encanta la ciudad ! Es muy bonita! Yo hablo un poquito español en la ciudad. Me siente muy feliz! Yo aprendido muy mucho. Yo fui a lugar se llaman "Mr. Sanchos " El agua estaba bien. Miras mis fotos! Que Bonito! Yo quiero volver a ir.
March 16, 201650 Story of the day
The sun was shining when I woke up. We were planning to go to the park in the afternoon with my boyfriend but it had started to rain in the morning so we decided to stay at home. We called our friends to invite them for a spontaneous party. We were so excited about it. Our invitations were accepted by everyone. So we needed to be very quickly to buy some food. We went to the shop after we had agreed on the menu. We made some party sandwiches, lot of shrimp with sauce and salad. The dessert was chocolate brownie with ice cream. We bought a lots of beer, champagne, and wine. The party was set up before the first guest arrived. Everything went so smooth and everybody really enjoyed the evening. We played board games, watched movies and we talked a lot with everybody. We started out to clean up after our last guest went home. We were tired and we fell asleep very fast. Anyway it was well worth it to do this party. and Everything was perfect.0 votedFebruary 17, 20161
