IELTS WRITING PRACTICE TASK 2 - What score will you give for this essay? Q: Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys? ANSWER: Modern family nowadays can afford more and better products like entertainment, transportation, etc. That also include more toy and games for their children. Understandably this also come with a beneficial and detrimental effect. Most parents will argue that there is nothing wrong with having more toy for the kid to have fun with. One of the reason is that, by having the kid to played with a large variety of toy, it will stimulated their creativity and curiosity. Modern toy also possessed diverse features to enrich children with new skill such as to construct, and design an object, a good example of modern toy would be lego bricks that can be assembled into different shape. It could similarly assisted boy and girl to learned colours, alphabet, and size of object like triangle, square, oval. In addition, modern toys are designed not only to entertained, but also to educated the kid in areas such as languages, shapes, patterns, and all things that might increased their sensor recognition. On the other hand, having a load of toys might as well bring negative impact for the kid. For one, wealthy parents might spoil their children behaviour by indulged the children whims. This would be certain to brought problem in the future, as the young boy grow into adult. They seems more likely to be more entitled for every object, as they have grown accustomed to get their desire fulfilled. For another, a growing child’c concentration will be prone to get distracted, as they were constantly bombarded with more and more toys. And finally on the social aspect, older children might becomes a target of envy from their fellow classmates, if they appear to owned a lot more possessions than their peers. In summary, there is a clear reason why parents have to be selective in choosing to purchase toys for their children. So, it is up to each parent to decided to what extent the toy can bring more positive effect rather than negative one.

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IELTS EXERCISE Recently I tried to write a view ielts essay, didn’t know if there is any mistake in grammar or not: TOPIC: Benefits of Email in business and community Modern technology has been changing the way people communicate, in particular over the last several decades. The invention of Email had been an important breakthrough of communication for business and community, however positive and important it was, there is still some drawbacks for email at present. But personally I believe that the benefits of email is more important than its negative sides, in respect for its economic and practical reasons. First of all, the use of email had assisted economic and market development, especially for Small-Medium Enterprises (SMEs), and online commerce commonly known as e-commerce. Email has been enabling them to communicate easily, faster, and cheaper with its customer, for which the latter was by far the most important reason why they used email. For many SMEs and e-commerce company, the usage of email contributes to a significant reduction of operating costs, and better services for complain, and promotion to its customers. Another reason why I believe that the email is advantageous, due to the reason, that the flexibility of email itself. To access email service, we only need to had a stable internet connection, as well as a device, such as PCs, laptop, mobile phone, etc. For this reason, email helped people to communicate easily anywhere they go. Even more, one laptop, PCs, or mobile phone could be used to access multiple email account, thus allowing a lot of people to access it without having to had their own laptop. To sum up, while of course there are still some negative effect of using email, for instances, there are increase in workload, more pressure as more workload, and probability of virus infection on your PCs or laptop. But, the benefit of email, clearly enhanced our ability to communicate professionally and socially far beyond its drawbacks.