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Could you check my writing ? Rat Race It is very common word in corporation LIFE. It means people compete with each other , everybody want to be the best. People are ruthless. They don’t care if anybody hurts and when they make somebody feel bad. SPORT I enjoy watching sport that consisft of action where many things happen all the time like volleyball. There is constant action

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Could you check my writing ?

Rat Race
It is very common word in corporation LIFE life. It means people compete with each other, and everybody want to be the best. People are ruthless. They don’t care if anybody gets hurts and when they make somebody feel bad.

SPORT
I enjoy watching sports that consisft consist of action, where many things happen all the time, like volleyball. There is constant action.

If I was writing the sport section I would have said "I enjoy watching sports that have a lot of action, like volleyball. There is always something happening."

Good Job! 

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Could you check my writing ?

Rat Race
It is  a very common word in corporation LIFE. It means people can compete with each other , and everybody want to be the best. People are ruthless, and They don’t care if anybody gets hurt and when they make somebody feel bad.

SPORT
I am enjoy watching sport that consists of action where many things happen all the time like volleyball. There is constant action


PS: I tried to corrected grammatical error or any mispronounce words like ‘consists’, as well as altered a few of your sentences to make it more coherent.The RED highlight meant that I don’t know what you wish to say.

Good Luck!

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I'm not fluent in english but I think it's all right. Last week I was thinking about this concept and how the money moves the world. Since I read the book "Rich dad poor dad" I try to get out of rat race.

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