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Quarto dia

Hoje trabalhei muito.
Então fui caminhar no parque.
Сomprei morangos. Gosto-a. Eu gosto!
Amanhã gostaria de ir ao cinema.

Gosto de estudar línguas estrangeiras.

Bom trabalho, parabéns!

My Wife!!!

My wife is called Ana Claudia. She is a student. She's from União da Vitória-PR, but she lives in Curitiba-PR. She starts studying at eight o' clock in the morning and finishes at twelve o' clock. In her free time she goes to the gym, goes to the cinema, goes to the mall or park.

Well done! :)

Uma recomendação

Estou fascinado pelo cérebro. Esta coisa que controla todos os nossos pensamentos e movimentos e é ainda um grande mistério para nós. Há uma apresentação em no TEDTalks por Moran Cerf sobre o cérebro e os sonhos. Ele fala sobre como os sonhos podem ser previstos, e mesmo mudados! Penso que esta tecnologia pode ser usado por para bons o maus propósitos, então deve ser bem protegida! Desfrute a apresentação, é muito interessante.

https://www.ted.com/talks/moran_cerf_how_scientists_are_trying_to_hack_your_dreams

Can you really tell if a kid is lying?

After watching this interesting podcast from TEDTalks I came I've come to a the conclusion that I am a terrible lier lie detector like most people are. The presentation is hosted by a developmental researcher named Kang Lee, whom has been studying for the past twenty years how kids learn to lie.
On the video he contradicted three common beliefs we still have about children, which one of them is that most adults think they can easily detect easily children's lies. Moreover, Lee talked about a guessing game he had made with kids from all over the world, in which children had to guess numbers on the cards and they were not allowed to peek, however in the middle of the game the kids were left alone and when they were asked if they had peeked at the cards, most of them lied.
Furthermore, Kang showed a video of two kids who played the guessing game and asked the audience which of the kids were was lying. The interesting thing was that everybody answered the kid number 1, even myself I answered the same thing, but to our surprise, the liar was the kid number 2. Additionally, Mr Lee also presented a new technology that not only reveals hidden emotions related to lies, but detects people's lies at an 80% rate. Anyway, children are pretty good liars and if you think you can tell when they're lying, think twice.