Balance
My dream is enjoying
the life. I'm a web designer who
have has worked for 8 years. I'm a hard wo
rker. No
rmally I work overtime until midnight most
of weekday
s.
I've lived this life style. Someday I realized i would waste my life. [See Comment 1 below.] I want to
make balance
of life and work. And I really want to spend
the time
being happy with happiness.
The Happiness is, in my mind,
that meeting my friends after work
to meet my friends,
to play
ing the guitar,
to exersice exercising in a park,
to draw
ing some pictures. But it's impossible if I work overtime most
of every day
s. Sometimes I'm sick,
and sometimes I just want to rest without work. But I
should work like a robot. I'm not a person who hate
s work. I love design
, and love visual art. They make
s my heart flutter
ing.
I just want to make my working time by myself. [See Comment 2 below.] How can I
make balance
of life and work? How can I change my life
? :o
Suggestions:
Instead of "who has worked for 8 years," I would say "and I've worked for 8 years."
For the sentences in gray, I'm not sure if I understand what you want to say.
Comment 1: You could say something like, "I'm done living this lifestyle. I realize this lifestyle will waste my life." or "I've lived this lifestyle for 8 years [or a different period of time]. Now I realize it will waste my life."
Comment 2: You could say, "I just want to make time for myself."
