The girl what I like me
She have a smile very very pretty, I remember the first day when I saw, this day i dont think in other things.
her name is Tania, She lives in Loja, She dont know of my feelings, maybe she believe that I dont like because I am a little shy and always I am nervious when we are in a same place, I can not talk with her, some day I will tell her.
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The girl that I like
She has a very pretty smile. I
remember the first day I saw it/her
(the smile/ the girl). On
that day, I didn't think of other
things. [It's more natural to say, "On that day, I didn't
think of anything else" or "That day, I couldn't think of
anything else."]
Her name is Tania. She lives in Loja. She doesn't know my
feelings. Maybe she thinks I don't like her because
I am a little shy and always nervous when we are in the same
place. I cannot talk with her. Someday I
will tell her.
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The girl that I like
She haHer name is Tania, She lives in Loja. She
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The girl what who/that I like me
She have has a very pretty smile very very pretty, I remember the first day when I saw*, this that day I dodidnt think about in anything else/other things.Her name is Tania, she lives in Loja, She doesn't know of my feelings, maybe she thinks/believes that I don't like her, because I am a little shy, and I am always I am nervous. When we are in a the same place, I can not talk with her, but some day I will tell her.
* I remember the first day I saw her / I remember the day/when I first saw her
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Man the first thing, you must to lose your shyness and you shouldn't declare your feelings at once... cuz it will shock her... if you wanna talk about this u can message me
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