I went to a year end party yesterday. I drank a lot of liqur(liquor). I have(am a) little hungover. I didn't go to see Star Wars.
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Today there is(was)to(a) party after work. I wanted to start at 20:30, but I don't(didn't) finish work in time....
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About my hometown
Hello everyone, merry Christmas! Today,I would like to speak/write about my hometown. My hometown is Ehime prefecture, But(but) I'm living in Kanagawa toso I can commute to my University.
Ehime's staple product is(are) oranges. This(The) orangeshere is(are) outstandingly more delicious than other prefecture's(prefectures') oranges.
And thenAlso, Ehime has the most oldest spa(温泉onsen) in Japan. This spa's name is DOGO ONSEN. (道後温泉). Dogo onsen is very popular with tourists from abroad.
I love Ehime. If you will visit japan, please come by Ehime^^
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my first article
Hello. Today I'm feeling very drunk today because I met my friends and drunk(drank) too much alcohol such as beer, whisky and Japanese sake. I amworry(worried) that this is not so nice(appropriate) for my first italki article, but actually I'm not afraid to write English now because of the alcohol. That is why I'm writing about today's drinking session. Thank you.