my first article

Hello.
Today I'm feeling very drunk today because I met my friends and drunk(drank) too much alcohol such as beer, whisky and Japanese sake.
I am worry(worried) that this is not so nice(appropriate) for my first italki article, but actually I'm not afraid to write English now because of the alcohol.
That is why I'm writing about today's drinking session.
Thank you.

my first article

Hello.
Today I'm very drunk because I met my friends and drunk TOO much alcohol such as beer, whisky and Japanese sake.
I AM WORRY ABOUT MY BEİNG ALCOHOLIC. this is not so nice for my first italki article, but actually I'm not afraid OF WRİTİNG English now because of alcohol.
That is why I'm writing about ALCOHOL.
Thank you.

my first article

Hello.
Today I'm very drunk because I met my friends and drank too much alcohol: such as beer, whisky and Japanese sake.
I worry that this is not so nice the best for my first italki article, but now I'm not afraid to write in English now because of thanks to the alcohol.
That is why I'm writing about today's drinking.
Thank you.